My new site: please review....

Please review my site and let me know what you think I would really appreciate it.

http://www.freewebs.com/fhbb

any comments suggestions that you can help me with I would appreciate it.

thanks

 

um I don't really like it, how it's got like a long pages feel to it.

You should probably try to get off of freewebs too by the way. If you need any help doing that just PM me.

 

Add favicon Frebe and adsense must go higher.

 

need some improvement in design.

thanks

 

Thx nikon for review
Now Desing is veeery simple and I will change him in near future.
Now I must write new content.

 

u use free site, only external llinkx used?

 

It needs a little bit of work - the content all one on top of another does not work too well here - maybe a double or triple column would be a better layout. Freewebs does not really do that - the links shouldn't be in all caps, and maybe reword so that they all fit in one line. The design I have seen on too many sites (one of the problems with freewebs) so that distracts from your content as well ... nice start though!

 

you should development your style.

 

Thank you allot of the points i can use, but others I have no control on..such as ..Freewebs only allows for pre-formatted webpages that a person can use so only thing i can really change is the tops and how it looks (setup) as far as the cap thing i am getting on that right away.

114211 I will send you a pm because any help in this is greatly appreciated.

I do have another site that I am currently working on which I got for free but at this time isn't ready for viewing. (normally I just use anything that I can get for free which this new site I got for free but have much more room to work).

What is favicon? never heard of it...as far as google adsense I have this but haven't found how to get it to work on the site. It would probably work if I paid for not having automatic ads on my site. but at this point paying for something is out of the question.

Thanks for everyones help on this issue.

 

I didn't really like the large ads before the content

 

I cant believe people are still using freewebs lol. I used it like 5-6 yrs ago to learn html.

Anyways, i think your site is one of those for which i will immediately click the 'x' button in the browser. It doesnt have the credibility IMO. There are a lot of ads in it too..

 

Blend your adsense more.. and put it higher as suggested...

 

I am not sure what ads your are talking about why cant i see them. On the main page only ad that I know of is the one at the top which is google....(I cannot remove because I keep the site for free) and the only other ad should be at the bottom (again I have no control of this) can someone please post a screenshot of what ads you are seeing?

or let me know where the ads are at? I just checked it again before writing this and again I only see 2 ads on the page. I do know that my computer is current and up to date so I don't think i have a viewing problem in this area.

thanks for your time in this matter

 

ok, firstly dont use freewebs, domains theese days are so cheap strato-hosting.co.uk £1 for a year including server and design needs working on

 

With some dark themed sites the print gets hard to distinguish but with yours it is not a problem. Good

 

It's okay but the freewebhosting is kinda a turn-off

 

I didn't really like the large ads before the content sit down draw out a map then build dont rush it as it what you present that makes the site.

 

ah... ur site need drastic change. 1stly remove those big adds from the top. keep links on the left side.. many more...

cheers.

 

Great....can someone please post a screenshot or link so I can actually see what ads you all are talking about. If you don't recommend free webs....then what would you recommend considering since i am on a fixed income that spending allot of money for a website is out of the question.