I took some time and wrote my own sales copy for the Young Wealth Revolution. I thought about hiring a copywriter, but I wanted to see where my mind could take me first. www.YoungWealthRevolution.com Looking forward to comments on this one. Thanks - Phil
Looks better than what it used to be like. Why is the exact same site at http://www.psmonlinewealth.com , is there something shady going on here? Why don't you offer a couple of free reviews for members here as I see you have absolutely no testimonials on your page, is that because your product is no good or what?
I don't think its a big deal to have another domain name point to the same site. That's everywhere online. I have reviews on the program, but they are emails.... I have taken screen shots of them, and edited some "give aways", but I am unsure on how to put them on the site. I had a sweet design made with a matching template, but FreeWebs won't let me upload my own template. See, I make most of my money online through Adsense, and when I first started in the online game, I had no clue on how to build a website... so I went with FreeWebs because they had the easiest site builder. Now, with my FreeWebs domain services, the Adsense is perfect... but obviously my digital product it's not. I registered my Membership Site through HostPapa.com , for unlimited Bandwith... and I tried to upload the template I had designed and it said it wasn't in "Pro Format". So, if you know where I can upload my custom template, I would greatley appreciate the help. I've been looking at some Copywriters for the Pitch..... so I have that covered. Thanks - Phil
Why did you make a new thread? Technically you are spamming the forum listings which I think means you should be penalized. Anybody agree?
Doesn't answer the question as to why you do it and can you show me another vendor on D.P here who does the same thing seeing as it's done everywhere online? So you can manage to upload other images just not the email images.....sounds rather suspicious......any way without testimonials your conversions will suck , there is a reason everybody uses them........
I've been on the fence about this guy ever since it started. Spammer or noob? Or a spamming noob? I'm inclined toward everyone helping the dude out. At least he's keeping the lines of communication open. Most spammers cut and run. Advice: spell check; add a title tag; work on those headers some more; get rid of the black color scheme; etc.
Why Not use a 301 Redirect instead? And seriously: get a copywriter! It's cheap and it was the best thing I did. I feel your copy misses a few of the things that copywriter generally cover (the whole create a desire, then need, etc.) I'm not an expert copywriter - but you should always got to your page and ask yourself: would I buy this product?
Listen to the above poster. You can pay someone probably $25-$50 to write all the content. What does the cost matter when you make it back in just 1 sale of your own
Most Definitley..... If anyone knows of a copywriter, under a couple G's , let me know.... I have been shopping, and the ones I found are well over the $1,000 mark. Money is not an issue, so if you know of any... and you wan't to give them away... Let me know - Thanks, Phil
Just Revised the Sales Page a tad bit. You should check it out, see if you think it's any better than before.
I'm launching a new product soon... I have all my resources together... Start up cost totaled at $3,000 so far !
I know a GREAT copywirter that did some work for me recently. He's on Elance.com - Search for "The Kublakhan Group". (sigh... still can't post links ) Considering the quality of his work, he was dirt cheap well under $1000
The Company Tianjin ZhengQian Business & Trading Co., Ltd is one of the largest manufacturers of fertilizer-grade fish meal, feed-grade fish meal, fish flour, meat and bone meal, corn gluten meal, DDGS (corn gluten meal). The fertilizer-grade fish meal and DDGS（corn alcohol grains）produced by our company cooperates with the Chinese Academy of Science. It’s the first corporation which exports fishmeal in north area of Shandong .Our products sells to Japan , Korea , Egypt , Iran ,Jordan, Turkey etc.. The company’s tenet: Friendship first and then business. Our principal products are fertilizer-grade fish meal, feed-grade fish meal, fish flour,meat and bone meal, corn gluten meal, DDGS（corn alcohol grains）. All of the products are high in quality and low in price .It is a pleasure for our company to do the business with the customers all over the world. Fertilizer-grade Fishmeal Degree one: albumen>=45%-65%, moisture<=10%, salt<=2%, fat<=10% . Degree two: moisture<=14%,salt<=3%, fat<=10%. Meat & bone meal The quality standard: Crude protein>=50% fat<=9% ash<=33% calcium<=10% phosphor>=4% salmonella 0 Fish flour The quality standard: protein>=55% , moisture<=9 %, salt<=6%, fat<=14%. Corn Gluten Meal Specifications: Crude protein>=60%，Crude ash <=2.8%，Moisture <=10% DDGS（corn alcohol grains） The quality standard: Crude protein >=28.0% ,Crude fiber<=12.8%,Crude fat <=8.0% ,Crude ash <=4.5%,Moisture <=12.0% Fish Meal (Feed Grade) The quality standard: Protein>=64%, fat<=8% , moisture<=10%, ash<=17% sand and salt <=5%, sand<=2%
I went ahead and checked out elance.com, but no sign of the "Kublakhan" group. I wan't to also know what you all think about the Membership video at the bottom of the page.. For some reason, I think that will make it convert alot better..... ? www.YoungWealthRevolution.com Right before the "Order Now" button