My New Promotional Work for Fifa online 2 ! Review it...

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by reni2040, Aug 9, 2009.

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    Hi guys...This is a commercial Work created for Fifa online 2 Machinima Contest.. The theme was to create a Commercial for one of there products from item shop..Hope u all like it..

    Commercial video : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2XsSXg-wQCk
     
    reni2040, Aug 9, 2009 IP
  2. Helado

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    I like it, although near the end it flashes too much and I can't read what it says after 'finishing'.
     
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  3. reni2040

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    oh thnx....ya it was a mistake....thnx for pointing out....:)
     
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    Good presentation and it was interactive too.
     
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    WoW, it is really Great one,
    thx
     
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    interesting work, this should go down well with the majority of those you will be targeting.
     
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  7. N_Adra

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    reni2040 you did a good job.
    Music - it's great, it worked with what you were presenting.
    At 0:28 seconds the text, Condition Up Item, fades out and fades back in then fades back out.
    In my personal opinion I think it should fade out once and that is it.
    At 0:16 seconds, I liked how the ball was dribbling up and down, it looked
    But when the better sign flipped around and returned to it's original position, it didn't really fit overall, I immediately noticed that.

    Hopefully I was able to give you the type of review you'd like.
    You did an exceptional job!
     
    N_Adra, Aug 10, 2009 IP
  8. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    Nice video. The presentation and the graphics looks great in it..
     
    2advance, Aug 10, 2009 IP