My new project - Need your reviews

Discussion in 'Websites' started by khan11, Aug 20, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello guys/gals,


    Long time no see! because i was busy in my exams and after exams i was busy in creating my new project which is fully launched on 19th of august 2007.


    Its website of a folk Pakistani singer "Attaullah Essa Khailvi". It contains his pictures, profile and all the music collection which you can listen online for free.

    I'm thankful to all my fellows who helped me in scripting.


    http://attaullahfansclub.com



    Waiting for your comments about this website....
     
    khan11, Aug 20, 2007 IP
  2. alexts

    alexts Well-Known Member

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    #2

    Looks good.
    Except:
    In my opinion banner should be smaller and get rid of scrolling text.
     
    alexts, Aug 20, 2007 IP
  3. lojadeluxo

    lojadeluxo Well-Known Member

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    #5
    I like the design....
    Congrats!
     
    lojadeluxo, Aug 20, 2007 IP
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    #6
    It'd be nice to have a section where we can listen to and stream audio samples... to get to know the singer in general.
     
    bablooji, Aug 20, 2007 IP
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    #7
    You've created a nice site in a small enough niche that you should be able to rank pretty well. That's a nice start.

    I'd do some basic keyword research as you think about writing your meta title, meta description, h1 tags and descriptive text. For example, the Overture Keyword Tool shows the following requests in January 2007 for "Attaullah":
    365 attaullah khan
    114 attaullah khan song
    34 attaullah khan essakhilvi
    33 attaullah khan essa
    32 attaullah khan download
    31 attaullah song
    31 attaullah tube
    28 attaullah khan mp3
    26 attaullah khan song track
    26 attaullah qazi

    Yet, the term "khan" doesn't really appear on your site. Also, "soundtrack" (which you've put in the meta title) isn't a term that people commonly search for in conjunction with this singer's name -- try "song", "download" or "mp3" instead.

    Good luck!
    -Chris
     
    cbrooks, Aug 21, 2007 IP
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    cheeta.admin Well-Known Member

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    #8
    nice work khan sab u like attullah !
    still im impressed where u frm !
    im also frm pak
     
    cheeta.admin, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  7. 8everything

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    #9
    The header animation kind of gives me a headache and the structure of the layout is a bit too blocky.. However, the content is neatly organized :)
     
    8everything, Aug 21, 2007 IP
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    #10
    not bad at all. All the moving stuff in the header becomes distracting. As one wants to read what is going on in the site, the moving stuff upstairs keep drawing your attention. If you do have to have something moving in the header, why not play it once or twice and then let it stop.
     
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    selen Well-Known Member

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    #11
    I like it looks good, but I've never heard anything about this singer before
     
    selen, Aug 21, 2007 IP
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    #12
    great site ! Site looks professional. Good job!
     
    Webseoleo, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  11. khan11

    khan11 Active Member

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    #13
    Alright, i've done everything as you said. Thank you so much for your nice suggestion!


    OK guys! I have now removed that ticker from the top, I just added that to show the latest website updates but you say it hurts so its finished now.

    Any more ideas or suggestion?

    Thanks again for reviewing.
     
    khan11, Aug 22, 2007 IP