My new business site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by linksoul36, Aug 3, 2011.

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    linksoul36, Aug 3, 2011 IP
  2. cannycookie

    cannycookie Peon

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    logo words are unreadable. Clearly still early days for you.  The words do not make sense, it reads like rambling gibberish. 
    Whats the relevance of the old people silhouette?  

    Best of luck 
     
    cannycookie, Aug 3, 2011 IP
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    I can't read it. It's like you gave a bunch of keywords to a machine and had it spit them out in random fashion. Even if you're english isn't the best, you ain't gonna get readers with that gobbledygook on the page. No idea what the logo says and some of the headers are a work in progress - 'H3'???

    I'd advise working on the content big time before you launch.
     
    rockyg, Aug 3, 2011 IP
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    mak3r Greenhorn

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    Look through your content first. it's in bad condition now. it's one of the most important things
     
    mak3r, Aug 3, 2011 IP