My internal page has to get better position than my advertiser site.how? pls go thro

I feel it's very interesting query....
http://www.blooloop.com : This is my site

and internal Page is:
http://www.blooloop.com/CompanyDetails/Amusement-Services-International-ASI-/325

In above page My advertiser site is : www.asi-world.com.

Now, My query is

1. For my client "search keywords".My site(blooloop.co.uk) has to get better positions in Google.How?

2.Can u pls, Give me On-Page suggestions for my internal page(http://www.blooloop.com/CompanyDetails/Amusement-Services-International-ASI-/325)

3. What stuff we need to add for our page to get better than client site

 

Your site is EXTREMELY slow. Before you worry about optimizing your site, I would advise you to reconsider the design and use of graphics. Below is result of your site's speed.

You either run your site on some really cheap hosting company or from home. It's most probably MySQL that's lagging behind or your have too many graphics.

So I would start with ensuring good speed. Remember, crawlers see slow speed as bad.

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Title: Amusement Park Industry-Theme Park Business Directory–Amusement Park

Diagnosis
Global Statistics
Total HTTP Requests: 108
Total Size: 1304405 bytes

Download Times*
Connection Rate Download Time
14.4K 1032.58 seconds
28.8K 527.09 seconds
33.6K 454.88 seconds
56K 281.57 seconds
ISDN 128K 101.21 seconds
T1 1.44Mbps 28.51 seconds



Analysis and Recommendations
TOTAL_HTML - Congratulations, the total number of HTML files on this page (including the main HTML file) is 1 which most browsers can multithread. Minimizing HTTP requests is key for web site optimization.
TOTAL_OBJECTS - Warning! The total number of objects on this page is 108 - consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your external objects. Replace graphic rollovers with CSS rollovers to speed display and minimize HTTP requests.
TOTAL_IMAGES - Warning! The total number of images on this page is 74 , consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your graphics. Replace graphic rollovers with CSS rollovers to speed display and minimize HTTP requests.
TOTAL_CSS - Caution. The total number of external CSS files on this page is 5 , consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your external CSS files. Ideally you should have one (or even embed CSS for high-traffic pages) on your pages.
TOTAL_MULTIM - Warning! The total number of external multimedia files on this page is 7 , consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your external files. Ideally you should have one (or even none) in your page.
TOTAL_SIZE - Warning! The total size of this page is 1304405 bytes, which will load in 281.57 seconds on a 56Kbps modem. Consider reducing total page size to less than 30K to achieve sub eight second response times on 56K connections. Pages over 100K exceed most attention thresholds at 56Kbps, even with feedback. Consider contacting us about our optimization services.
TOTAL_SCRIPT - Warning! The total number of external script files on this page is 21 , consider reducing this to a more reasonable number. Combine, refine, and optimize your external script files. Ideally you should have one (or even embed scripts for high-traffic pages) on your pages.
HTML_SIZE - Warning! The total size of this HTML page is 107122 bytes, which is over 100K! Consider optimizing your HTML and eliminating unnecessary content and features.
IMAGES_SIZE - Warning! The total size of your images is 626718 bytes, which is over 30K. Consider optimizing your images for size, combining them, and replacing graphic rollovers with CSS.
SCRIPT_SIZE - Warning! The total size of external your scripts is 262740 bytes, which is over 8K. Consider optimizing your scripts for size, combining them, and using compression where appropriate for any scripts placed in the HEAD of your documents.
CSS_SIZE - Warning! The total size of your external CSS is 66435 bytes, which is over 8K. Consider optimizing your CSS for size by eliminating whitespace, using shorthand notation, and combining multiple CSS files where appropriate.
MULTIM_SIZE - Warning! The total size of your external multimedia is 241390 bytes, which is over 20K. Consider optimizing your multimedia files for size, or replacing them with lower-bandwidth alternatives, or eliminating them altogether.

 

Hi joogle,

Thank you very much for giving wonderful suggestions to me.Can you please, spend your valuable time on my site. i am expecting wonderful suggestions from you

 

Why did you start two threads with the same topic??

 

-Your title and keyword tags have too many repitions. Remember crawlers use common sense and logic, so when they come across tags like ones on your site, they will get very suspecious, i.e. keyword stuffing.

-Your homepage is very lengthy. It takes at least 5 screens to scroll.

-You have too much flash and Javascript (things crawlers aren't so fond of)

There is a trade off between what you want to give to users and what you want to give to crawlers. Crawlers only knows text and users like graphics. You must find a balance.