my golf website

hello this made only for golf lovers

www.go4golfing.org

please suggest me any changes can be made

 

I think you need to split your article into paragraphs. It's just a big block of text. Hard to read that way.

 

My first impression was.. an overload of text Maybe try adding a graphic header / logo design on the top of your page? Even some golf related icons within your text area will give it a nicer look

I really like how you organized your affiliate links & ads at the bottom of the page.

 

my god, my eyes hurt from the text. I've been textified(if thats even a word) lol.

 

you have to many referal buttons on your page btw... google seemed to ahve changed there TOS just a week ago and only allowing a few now... its below 4 for sure but i may be wrong check for yourself

 

Add Some Images to your site

 

Original content is never a bad thing.

 

thanks for all your comments

 

The site looks ok, but there is too much text on the front page. You may want to split it into articles on different pages. Also, put a suggestive picture with each article.

 

i would say use margins and a set width of 750 pixels wide

 

should go well in search engines if the content is unique. But it is hard to read..

 

PICTURES!!! you need more pictures my friend. No matter how good the content is, not many people want to be on a page which is visually attractive. Like everbody else said, break it up, try to add some pictures and visual dividers. Also, you might want to consider a more appealing/prominent navigation bar. The content looks great though. Good Luck.

 

2 much of TEXT....................

 

Hi. Sorry to say, but you are not going to make any money from this site. This is a standard mfa site that are given away for free all over the web. Those articles can be found on thousands of web sites and are not worth anything.

 

Add some more images to the frontpage.

 

there is way to much text there and its layed out in a confusing manner. try and split it up a bit to colums and paragraphs. also new people who visit that site are probably not going to read all that writing.

 

Mate, that is a MFA site. I would suggest making a real site and then you will have a good and solid site. Please dont get offended as I am just being honest.

 

thanks guys ,for you replies ill try to remake with your suggesions

 

Hi again. I hope you make the site so it should be promoted via viral promo, because you will not have visitors from Google.

 

Adsense template is what i see...you may "image" it up a bit and cut the paragraphs to wrap better.

If you can take a template like this and cut it up to be more user friendly you will make a better CTR overall. :0)