My first written article!

I have been paying people to write articles for me. I decided to give it a try myself.

Please tell me what you think. I have thick skin.

http://onlinedogtrainingbooks.com/dog-obedience-training/basic-obedience-commands/

 

Not too bad. Little clumsy, but gets the message across. Well done for first effort.

 

not bad. good luck with regular updates.

 

Well I dont know anything about your niche but it appears to work good, but dude get rid of the trashy adsense ready theme! Or atleast customize it like I did here: www.bzimage.org/blog/

 

Good one bro. Keep it up. Nice try...

 

You will find with time your skills will increase. It's an easy to read article which is half of the battle. Keep on writing your own content so that you can appreciate those few dollars you paid for others to write your content. It's not as easy as some people think.

 

You're kidding right?

 

Thanks for the comments. English class wasn't my best. I have read some articles that were so creative that I didn't want to stop reading. I would love to get to that point.

 

I second that, did you customize it??

I like your article, seems really nice. Great job, keep it up!!

 

I had a nice and smooth read. I think it is time for you to sack someone.

 

Not bad for the first time. Good luck!

 

I made some yes, it atleast has some appeal now compared to it default.

 

Looks good, all the best of luck with it.

 

The message is understood well enough, although I think you should add more explaination

 

Good try! Keep updating the blog at regular frequency.