My First Website

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    Sighter, May 11, 2009 IP
  2. TalentScout

    TalentScout Member

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    A better site template will make your site significantly better. Also, make sure to make it easy for social optimization by making sure you include social site buttons, as well as a share-this link/s.

    I would also suggest a more eye-catching, strong, solid header.

    All the best
    TS
     
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  3. Sighter

    Sighter Member

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    I agree im not the biggest fan of the layout and im looking for a better one but currently cannot find one because i'm using a limited program(godaddy's website tonight plan) in which they provide the layouts which arn't very appealing.

    Talent Scout, I have a good header but I'll use it for my new layout once i find it,Do you mind if i run a few layouts through you?

    But again thanks for comments i appreciate them all
     
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  4. googlerankmaniac

    googlerankmaniac Peon

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    Its definitely a first time website since i see you are using a lot of widgets. I like your content and front page. and Wow honestly Ive seen Technology News widget before in my dream lol its cool.
     
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  5. Sighter

    Sighter Member

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    Haha Yea I never saw the video wall before an once i did it was a must have.:D
     
    Sighter, May 11, 2009 IP
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    i think your content good, but your must changes or upgreded the themes.....because i dont like the template now:D
     
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  7. Sighter

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    I have a new template which i think is a winner but It won't be ready until tomorrow because I have to make it the whole page length, tell me what you think of it here

    And thanks for all the comments
     
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    biz123 Peon

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    I think you should simplify your site a bit. Less is more.
     
    biz123, May 11, 2009 IP
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    DnWebMarketplace Banned

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    I like your template...very clean...but you can reformat your content placement to be better. Good luck.
     
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    The content is great but the logo is not well designed
     
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    RaZzYeL Well-Known Member

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    For your first site this is an amazing work ... to improve it you could make a template more high-tech to fit with the theme... to make a more dynamic banner ... and you could rearrange the content to be more easy to read .

    Good luck !!
     
    RaZzYeL, May 12, 2009 IP
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    The content is good. The layout and design isn't very attractive, I would suggest that you work on it at once.
    good luck!
     
    .black.white., May 12, 2009 IP
  13. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    Good contents to read and loading time is fast.But you can search for a good template and layout with attractive color schemes.Thanks for sharing..
     
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    One thing I didn't see mentioned is how all of the content seems to basically run together. I know it doesn't literally touch, but scrolling down, it just makes me feel cluttered.
    For a first time website, it's great. And I know it will get better with time.
     
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  15. Sighter

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    I appreciate each comment they have thus far helped me relize my mistakes,so thank you all :D
     
    Sighter, May 12, 2009 IP
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    Aaahh! you can better use PX instead of PT in your Title
     
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  17. Sighter

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    What do you mean by PX instead of PT?
     
    Sighter, May 12, 2009 IP
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    #18
    same as other..the template should be changed,
     
    xhunter, May 12, 2009 IP
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    I looked over your set and personally I think it needs a better layout. At first glance it seems a little spammy with so many ads (which takes away from the content). Usually when I come upon such a site - I simply hit the back button.

    With a little work it has great potential.
     
    WebFlipGirl, May 13, 2009 IP
  20. victoriaphee

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    In my opinion, you should also add generic keywords such as investment, good investment, etc. And you can add at least one of the on the meta title
     
    victoriaphee, May 13, 2009 IP