My first website, promoting a CB product - experts please have a quick look? :)

Hey guys, I just finished the skeleton of my site I think. I just want people to have a look and tell me if this is a good way of marketing a Clickbank product.

My goal: to rank 1st for 2 keywords related to my niche and make sales.

Is my home page a good pre-sale? Is it too long? What is your opinion? Any other criticisms to make? This is my first website

Thank you so much.

http://www.increaseyourverticalhq.com

 

Good content, and a clean layout. I like it

 

The link is not loading and it gives error message-You tried to access the address http://www.increaseyourverticalhq.com/, which is currently unavailable.Check it out.

 

Keeping this thing in mind that it is your first attempt, you have done extraordinary good. The only suggestion i have for you is the alignment of text. Justify it and all else is THE BEST. Good work, Keep it up.

 

it works for me now? hmm how strange

 

good job, whats about your traffic?

 

Try to use autoresponders plugin for wordpress and offer free gift for your visitors..
sent follow-up email for your subcribers..
It will increase your sales up to 600% ..

 

thats a good idea i shall do that

 

bump!!

please more comments/ideas? any experts have any ideas?