My first website, have a look at my logo please

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Bolkie, Nov 22, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello guys,

    this website is the first I am ever building. I am not so much concerned about the content which I added already, because that is constantly updated and renewed. Then I realized I needed some nice logo on my header, especially since the Joomla! factor is still off the charts :D

    Because I draw and design like a 3 year old I asked one of my friends, who deals alot with graphic software, tho primarily construction and architecture, to make me a simple logo. Simple but not scaring away potential visitors.

    I think it looks pretty nice, tho because he is my friend, and I was part of the design process I am ofcourse really biased.

    So what do you guys think?

    adress is http://stocksandtrends.com

    Oh and pls don't spare me, I can take a hit or two :)

    Thanks, Bolk
     
    Bolkie, Nov 22, 2007 IP
  2. crazycatsville

    crazycatsville Peon

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    Maybe you should change ads placement. And the logo - do something with it. Make a glassy logo with a nice color.
     
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  3. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    Well the ads I am not really concerned about, I'll figure those out when in the future I actually get some traffic (i hope). Its more that I dont want ppl to think they stumble upon some flashy site hyping some investment scheme. So making a logo more 'glossy' wouldnt that be counterproductive?
     
    Bolkie, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  4. naveen.coder

    naveen.coder Banned

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    #4
    Good.. But the logo seems too simple... But its OK :)
     
    naveen.coder, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  5. medcarehealth

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    i think you should put some graph like image showing the rise and fall (of stocks). The jagged green lines looked more like electric current surges to me because its leaning on the letter "T" ( which seems to be the
    pole.
     
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  6. bronxe

    bronxe Active Member

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    I like it. You tried on this. Keep it up
     
    bronxe, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  7. monosodium

    monosodium Well-Known Member

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    yo man... you said you can take a hit. i hate to say this, i really do, i remember the first logo i made in 1996 and how much it meant to me... but your logo doesn't cut the mustard. it's awful. the font, color, and layout is retro, the logo is way too complicated, and the graph doesn't fit to the letters. a logo should be simple, elegant, not be all over the place... the way to test a logo is to shrink it to a really small size, if it's still recognizable, it's probably a good logo.

    even if you just get ANY bold-faced sans-serif font and put it in italics in a plain color, it will still look better than what you have. now i know beauty is in the eye of the beholder, so my opinion is subjective, but man, i doubt you'll find anyone who likes your logo.

    one thing, never work with friends, because if they do a sorry job, as happened in this case, you can't tell them to get lost. a friendship is forever right? so you will have to figure out some way to lose the logo without hurting your friend.

    the rest of your site is ok.
     
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  8. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    Do you think it would be better to make that green line less 'volatile' ?
     
    Bolkie, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  9. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    Thanks for your input, i really appreciate it !

    About the shrinking of the logo to see if it is still recognisable, I will definately try that out.

    And about the friend thing, you are absolutely right, I should have thought of that earlier. I know he has alot of other sketches on paper. I have those scanned, maybe ill upload the pdf so you guys can take a look at it. There are for instance somewhat alike designs, but wiithout the large S&T, just plain simple words in smaller fonts. Let me see if i can find it.
     
    Bolkie, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  10. Kuttan

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    It is Good. You work on it.
     
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  11. Bolkie

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    It is ok to upload/show .pdf right? I don't wanna violate some kind of ToS.
     
    Bolkie, Nov 23, 2007 IP
  12. consumertreehouse

    consumertreehouse Guest

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    #12
    I like the overall look. I think that the logo is too plain, you need something that pops. I thing you do have a great idea with the site. Good Luck
     
    consumertreehouse, Nov 23, 2007 IP
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    #13
    the logo is a bit busy, but it seems to work well enough for me.
     
    hedgehog, Nov 24, 2007 IP
  14. Bolkie

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  15. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    Can someone pls confirm these are accessible?

    Im kinda new to this, but I know 404 hits are not good :cool:
     
    Bolkie, Nov 30, 2007 IP
  16. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Bolkie.

    I had a look at your logo as requested in this thread. I would recommed that you ask your friend to take a second try at the logo. I don't want to discourage someone from getting into the graphics field... but I think that if you can get them to do another shot... that would be good...

    Ideas:
    Use the following search engine: picsearch.com

    • search term = stock exchange
    • search term = stock trends

    You will get some good ideas of inspiration for a logo.

    Hope that helps a little.
    Respectfully,
    Lhlalyam
     
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  17. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    I am definately trying that !

    Very good advice, thanks man,

    Bolk
     
    Bolkie, Nov 30, 2007 IP
  18. Lhlalyam

    Lhlalyam Well-Known Member

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    Hello Bolkie.

    Here is a quick idea that I tried out. Its very simple... but you can use it for an idea... I'd also suggest that you try out a different Joomla template. There are many free ones about on the web.

    [​IMG]

    Respectfully,
    Lhlalyam
     
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  19. definitive

    definitive Well-Known Member

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    The logo is ok, it's not great but it's certainly not the worst I've seen. It's average
     
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  20. Bolkie

    Bolkie Peon

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    Dear Lhlalyam,

    this is more help then I could have hoped for :D

    The logo looks pretty nice, I guess "less is more" right?

    About the templates. I need to look into that, I am kinda hesitant to join some of those paid template sites. Also, I am trying to get a thesis approved so i can graduate from university. I never knew one could be under that much stress :p So atm I only have around an hour a day to work on my little website.

    But I am definately keeping these ideas in mind. I really appreciate your help.

    Bolkie
     
    Bolkie, Nov 30, 2007 IP