My First Squidoo Lens - Please Review

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    Hey everybody,

    I just made my first Squidoo Lens. Please check it out and let me know if you see anything that could use some tweaking.

    http://www.squidoo.com/moneytoburn

    Thanks!
     
    wwstewart, Apr 20, 2008 IP
  2. zorah

    zorah Well-Known Member

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    I like your idea of a money making lens and your writing is nicely done.
     
    zorah, Apr 20, 2008 IP
  3. luden

    luden Active Member

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    Nice website but it looks like a blog.
     
    luden, Apr 27, 2008 IP
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    jmm123 Peon

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    Nice idea, but you might try narrowing your scope a little bit, and adding a little more details and personal experiences about the "money making" sites you list.
     
    jmm123, Apr 28, 2008 IP
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    Cryogenius Peon

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    You need to change the title of your Guestbook module. Also, find some groups to join that are about your subject matter (avoid free-for-all groups).
     
    Cryogenius, May 1, 2008 IP
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    satya_love Banned

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    Nice site indeed!

    I liked the features and design :)
     
    satya_love, May 2, 2008 IP