My First Squeeze Page (opinions?) - ***Free punches, feedback requested!

Discussion in 'ClickBank' started by Alphascorp, Feb 15, 2010.

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How Likely Would You Be To Market My eBook (How To Buy Foreclosure/REO Tutorial)?

  1. Not Likely - Due To Product Pricing Too High ($79.95/eBook)

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  2. Not Likely - Due To 75% Commission (Too Low ~$60/sale)

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  3. Not Likely - Due To Subject/Quality/Content

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  4. Moderately Likely

    50.0%
  5. Very Likely - Due To High Commissions

    50.0%
  6. Very Likely - Due To Popular Content (easy sell)

    50.0%
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  1. #1
    Ok, so here is my first attempt at a CB Squeeze page/Landing page for my first CB product and I am looking for some "constructive" feedback.

    I have a thick skin, but I do ask that you provide a solution and perhaps point me to a better example link, than simply saying it sucks.

    I just released it with CB so here it is:
    http://www.theanywheremillionaire.com/reo/

    I am offering 75% commission, which is about $60/sale, and I would appreciate your feedback on my pricing/commission structure as well. Is this pricing appealing? Average? or Below Average? And how should I approve it?

    www.theanywheremillionaire.com/reo/

    P.S.

    I am new to DigitalPoint.com but I REALLY am excited to get involved and learn all that I can while contributing wherever I can.
     
    Alphascorp, Feb 15, 2010 IP
  2. wpprofi

    wpprofi Peon

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    You have to make sure that the optin form is working. Adjust the form a little bit.
     
    wpprofi, Feb 16, 2010 IP
  3. InternetWarrior

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    This is no squeeze page but looks like an actual salesletter.

    To me the copy is full of headlines and subhead , there is no persuausion and many copy elements are missing I believe.

    You really nedd to take whats u have already there and make some major improvements.
     
    InternetWarrior, Feb 16, 2010 IP
  4. Alphascorp

    Alphascorp Peon

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    wpprofi,

    When you say "make sure the opt-in form is working" do you mean converting? I clicked on the "Order Now" button and it took me to the Clickbank payment page without any problem.

    Could you please clarify?

    Also, why does InternetWarrior say that this is NOT a squeeze page? Educate me please...


    Thanks. :)

    -Alphascorp
     
    Alphascorp, Feb 16, 2010 IP
  5. Dan Bainbridge

    Dan Bainbridge Active Member

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    A squeeze page is typically a page which provides a little info, and a signup form to find out more, or a little info then a link off to buy someone elses product. What you have is an actual sales page, selling your own product :)
     
    Dan Bainbridge, Feb 16, 2010 IP
  6. kidcaribfalife

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    It is very long squeeze pages are supposed to be short, not a lot of scrolling needed and to the point their is supposed to be a place to put their email and after they have been confirmed they are routed to this page So in actuality this is the sales and not the actual squeeze page. Would I buy I personally by this no Maybe because of the price and partially to the fact that I am a financial specialist. Your price is a little steep but what your offering is worth it.
     
    Last edited: Feb 16, 2010
    kidcaribfalife, Feb 16, 2010 IP