My first site

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  2. Synchronium

    Synchronium Active Member

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    English, motherf**ker. Do you speak it?
     
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  3. adamk

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    I like the layout and design overall. I think your space for "ad zone" is a bit too large and might distract people from the content area of the site.

    I would also recommend you check your grammar on the page. If I had to guess, I'd say English is not your native language. Perhaps have someone else write for you.

    Good luck!
     
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  4. r0man.de

    r0man.de Active Member

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    Have to agree to adamk's post (layoutpart). Its clear and simple.
    But, i would give that list (download, order) a structure. First, i thought its an ad.
     
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  5. jakomo

    jakomo Well-Known Member

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    Looks ok, congratulation :)

    Jakomo
     
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    IMO it is a clean and nice looking page. As others have mentioned, it is important to check the spelling and grammar -- you don't want visitors dwelling on misspellings when they should be concentrating on the content.

    Your page does not validate -- the W3C reports 14 Markup errors. It is important to use valid Markup if you wish to have your page function correctly in all User Agents (be Interoperable) -- please visit my page http://jp29.org/wpointerop.htm for detailed information on this subject.

    James
     
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    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    Doing better than my first website.
     
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  8. quite

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    #8
    need to be consistent in spelling and grammer, if you want to be succesful use you instead of u for example.
     
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    Very nice site, but pay some english guy here to proof read the text. And put a price for the ad space you are offering.
     
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    Grammar, successful *

    :)
     
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    It's nice, but you need to get someone to proof read the text.
     
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    #12
    looks bad - like a blogger page
     
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    Its ok for a first site but a lot needs to be improved
     
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  14. quite

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    this is a forum though, full spelling and grammer isnt neccessary!!
     
    quite, Aug 24, 2007 IP
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    Ok this is my first site that’s why its have lots of problem. And I am sorry all for the grammatical mistake. I am updating it very soon. Thank you all for the suggestion and comments.:)
     
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    But... but... but being a grammAr nazi just feels so good...

    Okay no, quite, they're referring to the site more than here. The site should not be in English, or should be in good English. : ) Not that English is easy or anything, but still...
     
    Stomme poes, Aug 24, 2007 IP