For a first site, it does not look bad. Still, there are too many annoying ads. I bet the second one will look better
Haha- it's funny seeing peoples first sites these days compared to mine well over 8 years ago. If I had created something like this as my first site I'd have been considered a webdev prodigy! Keep up the good work.
nice site, loaded a little slow, but ok. Red color looks like a warning instead of a welcoming feeling.