My First Sales Page - Suggestions?

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by donny, Dec 26, 2007.

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    Hi,

    I finally finished my very first Ebook sales website, and am wondering if there is anything I should do to improve it.

    Anything I should remove? Anything I should add? Anything I should change?

    Negative, Positive, Neutral comments are all welcome. I won't be offended :).

    http://www.DigitalThrone.com

    Thank you,
    Donny
     
    donny, Dec 26, 2007 IP
  2. donny

    donny Banned

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    I have removed the page for public access for the time being while I work to complete my to-do list. Thanks :).

    Thank you,
    Donny
     
    donny, Dec 26, 2007 IP
  3. Perry Rose

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    Although you had some good sell words in there, and I liked some of the sections in it, it looks too much like one of those typical BS template sites that sells crap.

    Even though there are plenty of idiots out there who may take the bait on such sites, God knows there are enough of them out there, especially on this board, you still want to appeal to the savvy ones also.

    Appeal to both groups of potential customers.

    Good luck with it.
     
    Perry Rose, Dec 26, 2007 IP