My first REAL article

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by TheBiaatch, Dec 13, 2007.

  1. #1
    I was wondering if you all could read trough my first article ever I wrote ;)
    I'm in college at the moment and was pretty bored so wrote it ;)

    PS: English isn't my nativa language so sorry if there are any mistakes...

    Link:
    http://www.warezteacher.com/news/downloading-of-copyrighted-materials/
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    Would be glad to recieve a review and if you find this article good please Stumble or Digg

    Would be happy to get constructieve critisism on my first article

    Greetz
     
    TheBiaatch, Dec 13, 2007 IP
  2. lilly28

    lilly28 Peon

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    There are quite a few grammatical errors but as you said English is not your first language. You should run it through Microsoft word or a similar program to help you fix these errors.

    The article itself is not a subject I agree with, I believe you should have to pay for a CD :)
     
    lilly28, Dec 13, 2007 IP
  3. webkid

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    Even i don't agree all your points, but you should be encouraged...
     
    webkid, Dec 13, 2007 IP
  4. TheBiaatch

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    Thx for the reviews, anyone else?
     
    TheBiaatch, Dec 14, 2007 IP