My first "portfolio" site

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    I do web site services and some other stuff and I've been in bad need of a portfolio / services page.

    I dont want any big 10 page web design site just something simple with the basic info.

    What do you think?

    http://www.oneaweek.us
     
    NoobieDoobieDo, Apr 17, 2007 IP
  2. 8everything

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    I like the header and background design! One little issue: I would move the header a bit higher til it touches the top of the screen (there's spacing there)
     
    8everything, Apr 17, 2007 IP
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    My critique is that you've got a great start here. However, I would work on the copy you've written. Show your customers that you're a wordsmith which is huge part of web design.

    Also, I think I found a typo:

    "...since the fee with vary based on the details."

    Good luck!
     
    caweir, Apr 17, 2007 IP
  4. grg

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    You should definitely add some pictures/screenshots of your work (thumbnails or something). Overall look is very nice, just a bit 'bloggish' as for portfolio site.
     
    grg, Apr 18, 2007 IP
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    it doesn't really llook professional. i agree with grg it could be that it looks like a blog template.
     
    milbs06, Apr 18, 2007 IP
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    Nice and Clean! but you got a poor header design
     
    erotomania, Apr 18, 2007 IP
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    Put some image thumbs next to the projects you done before.
     
    Michelangelo, Apr 18, 2007 IP
  8. NoobieDoobieDo

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    #8
    Thanks a lot yall.

    I know it doesn't look that good-I just grabbed an OK template and modified the header a bit.

    I appreciate the feeback

    The main purpose of the page is to hold the collection of links for work I've done cause lots of people like to ask for your portfolio while some other people don't care at all

    Ima make changes based on yalls suggestions later on
     
    NoobieDoobieDo, Apr 18, 2007 IP