My first original design...any thoughts?

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  1. skyview

    skyview Peon

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    #21
    it can improve a lot, hire a webdesigner
     
    skyview, Mar 31, 2010 IP
  2. nimonogi

    nimonogi Active Member

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    #22
    Nice design :) Just one comment...
    You can resize /online/image/brighter.jpg to 1px for faster loading. It takes some time to load now.
     
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    #23
    The use of Verdana as font is not nice.
    Did you think about to use WORDPRESS?

    The paragraph is not left-aligned, probably is a good idea to left-aligned this, good luck!
     
    psdtowordpress, Mar 31, 2010 IP
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    #24
    Norton Identifies It As Unsafe?
    Might need to look into that...
     
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  5. Caiden

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    #25
    Funny......I thought the same thing about the blue line. Other than that i like the design overall. Nice job!
     
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  6. yousellstuff1

    yousellstuff1 Active Member

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    #26
    thanks again everyone, I will go through all of this and then put a more updated one up later

    thanks
    Brandon
     
    yousellstuff1, Mar 31, 2010 IP
  7. sajan1kota

    sajan1kota Active Member

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    #27
    Very good work , I would say remove the border for the social buttons and also change the hover status of the menu at the tops and looks like the contact us button does not work. all the best.
     
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  8. digital29

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    #28
    Try changing that light blue..is awful...+ no borders for image links (social buttons)
     
    digital29, Apr 1, 2010 IP
  9. yousellstuff1

    yousellstuff1 Active Member

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    #29
    i was trying to add some color
    what do you think i should change it to?
     
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  10. Stephen Clark

    Stephen Clark Active Member

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    #30
    For your first one it's really not that bad. Good luck on future designs.
     
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    #31
    very nice good work~
     
    Matyy_22, Apr 2, 2010 IP
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