My first Opt-in Page I have ever created - Looking for reviews

Hey Guys,

Found this awesome new opportunity so I decided the best way to market it is with an opt-in page. Trouble is, I'm no expert when it comes to opt-in pages and getting peoples attention. Would love your feedback.

http://www.markvinnie.com/30mins/

Thanks

 

I think you lengthen the page to bit more with testimonials, discount and bla bla bla...