My First Lens - How did I do?

Hi, I've been on squidoo for three years,
EDIT:
I deleted my lens because squidoo is now hub pages. Thank you.

 

very nice,amazing

 

Ma'am. - what makes everyone on DP think I'm a sir? lolz.

thanks. I've never amazed anyone in my life. hehe. lol sorry.

 

Good providing content balance. Keep it up.

 

Quite solid lens, however I would suggest you to post more pictures, pics that would be in 250x250 size format. That gives you more chances to get your lens on first squidoo page, to be featured. Anyway like I said lens is good and I give you my like.

 

because you born in wrong era

 

Top class!! Well written and flows nicely into the links you're offering...would suggest a few more photos to help you rank...can't think that the Amazon ads detract from the article as most are related to your niche...no, if this was my lens, I would be proud!

 

Keep it up.

 

Hi. You made a great lens. It is very informative and can help others to understand the 'depression'.
I like it. i read it and got my mind opened. thanks!

 

Pretty cool lens. I shall swing by and give it a well-deserved like. I hope you're not going to stop making lenses, you're pretty good at it and if you stick with it the money will come. Good job.

 

Very nice, do you have any others?

 

maybe you should use some CSS frameworks for more detailing... but its really a solid lens

 

Thanks for reminding me, HAHA

Thank you. It started out as just a simple post, then I spent quite a while trying to find some content to fill it up. I will put more photos on my next one.

I'm trying. Everytime I get over there, though, I wind up reading everyone's lens and forget to write on mine.

You're right. Photos do make it better. I will try to do better next time around. Thank you.

Thank you. Depression is nothing to be ashamed of. But some people, especially celebs, have a hard time admitting they have clinical depression.

Okay, thank you. I've seen a people say they are making money this way. It only makes me think the squid.com owner must be getting filthy rich. lol

No, but I have a few started, just cant seem to focus on them. I'm sure I will be over there pretty soon hacking away on some new topic. Thank you

Okay, I don't think I have enough points just yet to use their fancy css or text boxes. The more points/activity you have, the more features you can use. Thanks!

 

I like the fact that you listed the benefits of getting the ebook
in bullet points and showed the user that they will be saving $47
by downloading the ebook.

But I was just wondering whether it was necessary to include the following statement
"From the desk of Samantha Milner"

 

I think this lens have some issues.

1) Content alignment not good.Make this attractive for users.
2) Add some more pictures in your lens specially in top area.
3)Bold some content or keywords
4) Do not include one feature two time ( i mean table of content).

 

it's depressing...

 

its better left the amazon as it is
if some one sells u get bucks

 

its good for those who are always in depression and this is good way to introduced the people how to get rid of this.

 

I have create a lot of high ranked lenses in the past. And yours has great potential...
Well written, well researched and correctly setup...

 

There's nothing like that on my lens. I am not trying to sell an ebook on there. All of the resources are free, and there are some amazon affiliate links on there, but those are put in as modules that squidoo provides. You must be talking about somebody elses page?