Hey there guys ok go easy on me my girlfriends been away, shes back home on tuesday and i thought id give my self a bit of a challenge. create my first ebook and website to sell it from. well, i opted for a niche that i have hideous amounts of experience in. online gaming. the site is now up, just turning the .docs into pdf's and then im gonna be on my way Was just wondering if i could get some feedback on the landing page Please be nice lol www.worldofwarcraftelite.net
Dude ur sales page is good but what for u added those red lines pointing to book at bottom of page? I hope its an temperory lines.
yes just a cursory view and those red lines at the bottom definitely need to go. Also, I think you can improve your headline to make it a little more juicy. I don't know much about WoW but maybe include some raw stats or something, definitely test this headline out when your site is ready for orders ... Also, stories always incite emotion, maybe tell how you started as beginner and progressed to your level now? just my 2 cents ... good luck ... (I need to work on my product now )
those red lines at the bottom are just until ive got everything up and running and made a decent button to match Thankyou for the feedback so far I will definately test the headline like mentioned i hope at least someone buys it, 1 sale will make 48 hours straight worth while
Ive changed the final image now, and the headline aswell, Think that will probably catch peoples attention alot more I love this forum so much keep the ideas coming
I generally dont like to give reviews due to people's landing pages just sucking... but yours was not bad... so here are some tips I think would help. Your headline is great. Captures and makes them read more. I would change a couple things: - "Gained XXX Level X's" -----Real numbers gain credibility... to me, this is just an X. I dont know what you're talking about. I'd put an actual figure there. - "Learn Professional WoW Gaming" -----Seems to be interjected a bit randomly, personally I'd just remove it. - "If You Had Access To The 1000's Of Techniques Used At My Disposal, Then You Could Easily Get It All..." -----I'd change 1000's to 'numerous' or something of the like, unless of course you're actually providing 2000+ techniques. - Another thing you might want to think about is actually adding "Customer testimonials." I see you mention the people you trained, but IMO it would be more powerful to have the person write something up. Nothing can show like true excitement that came from using your product... I stopped about 25% of the way down simply due to time, but I hope those tips help out a little. Feel free to use them or not. It's up to you. I have a couple more ideas on how you could market this ebook. PM me if you want to hear more.
Man,my congratulations for your work and result.Incredible landing page for a begginer ....impressed.
Thanks for all the critique so far guys, im loving the fact everyone thinks its good for a beginner Originally i put gained XX level XX's because i was unsure exactly what claims i wanted to make, forgot to actually insert some numbers lol, anyway they have been added now The bit about professional wow gaming has gone, originally it was in the headline and i thought it gave the ebook something different, but since changing it it seems very out of place. At present obviously i dont have any customer testimonials, so im going to have to wait for that I made all of it using a combination of dreamweaver and photoshop, i only got dreamweaver the beginning of this week, and have been working on this 48 hours straight and i've got to tell you its a life saver.
Hiya... The page certainly looks good. Nice effort. Have often thought about doing something similar myself - pls let us know here how things go. Best of luck!
Thankyou I will be sure to keep everyone informed, i will probably be looking for affiliates in the next few days