My first landing page - Please Review :)

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  1. #1
    I have just finished working on my landing page.I signed up for clickbank only a few days ago and I was wondering if you guys could give me some pointers on how to make my landing page better :)

    Landing Page Url : dietingtricks.info

    Thanks
    Haspel
     
    Haspel, Aug 7, 2008 IP
  2. priyakochin

    priyakochin Banned

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    #2
    nice landing page.
     
    priyakochin, Aug 7, 2008 IP
  3. thedynasty22

    thedynasty22 Peon

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    #3
    yeah it looks really good.
     
    thedynasty22, Aug 7, 2008 IP
  4. jaiburn

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    #4
    it looks really good, especially for a first try.

    I'd personally just change the color of the text rather than highlighting it, but its just personal preference.

    Well done!
     
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  5. apostars

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    #5
    Well done!
     
    apostars, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  6. seohyderabad

    seohyderabad Peon

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    #6
    looks cool .

    i think fonts are bit big & one more suggestion if u like

    u can show products something like svest(dot)org/Produkti-bg

    i think this will look much better
     
    seohyderabad, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  7. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Overall, looks ok.

    Some little tips:

    Separate cost, ease of use and all that stuff from Fat Loss 4 Idiots header. Leave some space there.

    Make a short, effective header, not like a paragraph with huge font.

    After a big header, make a little paragraph with a smaller font, and then list the products.
     
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  8. JoseArmando

    JoseArmando Active Member

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    #8
    Create interesting headline which will grab your customers attention because "Popular diets review" just doesn't do it ...

    Good luck
     
    JoseArmando, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  9. LTY83

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    Also, don't give all the books 5 stars - that looks way to staged :)
     
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    kush86 Well-Known Member

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    #10
    Nice landing page
     
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  11. Haspel

    Haspel Active Member

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    LTY only the first product has five stars the other two have 4 :) JoseArmando thanks for the advice I have changed my headline..
     
    Haspel, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  12. flip

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    #12
    it's reallly quite a nice start. make sure the images are clickable, too. maybe give it more of a "review" feel by adding more content, using the word "review" more often. otherwise, not bad.
     
    flip, Aug 8, 2008 IP
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    I love it how simple but so nice it is. I just like it how everything is easy to find by just scrolling down. The header is top-notch.
     
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    #14
    Nice page I like your download now and comments button and how you did the comments.
     
    emon878, Aug 8, 2008 IP
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    #15
    Cloak your affiliate links.
     
    SuperAffiliateBlogger, Aug 8, 2008 IP
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    #16
    you site look nice...
    well done!
     
    JulianHyde, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  17. HarryLee

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    #17
    All the products also have the same review,

    Ease of use: Very Easy
    Effectiveness: Very Effective

    Try to change them a bit so it doesn't seem fake ;)
     
    HarryLee, Aug 8, 2008 IP
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    #18
    it looks good. nice landing page,keep up the good work.

    DFLIKTO
     
    dflikto, Aug 8, 2008 IP
  19. mighty.one

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    #19
    Wow. Really simple but nice.
     
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  20. Haspel

    Haspel Active Member

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    #20
    Thanks for the advice guys I changed a few things and hopefully I will be able to make a few sales :)

    Can someone tell me how to cloak a link?
     
    Haspel, Aug 9, 2008 IP