So, I've created my first landing page ever - there is one small technical review + 2 customer reviews + 1 youtube satisfaction video ! Anyway check it : http://www.dirq.info Want to hear some feedback about this Good or bad - anyway it will help
To me, it looks more like you're trying to sell something. It's your landing page, right? your review? Howcome there are testimonials from other people? Also what Joshua said, nothing really stands out. I had no idea where to look when I went to your site. I just felt like closing it straight away.
Looks like my first website in 2002 Ok I am going to be short here Go to this site http://nvudev.com/index.php Spend a week and go through the website. By next saturday, you will be showing offf!
That's not a review, that's a sales pitch. It works too, Supper does that, but it's not as effective IMO as an "honest" looking review... And it seems you're having centering trouble in NVU lol. It was giving me a really hard time when I used it... try <center></center> tags.
Hi Many of the replies have been correct. With your landing page you do need to make parts stand out. I would recommend - place everything in the centre. No break the page up, have the following settings with a heading for each. (the heading text must be bigger and a different color) * Summary * Benefits of product * Review of product (search for reviews if you need ideas) * Product features * Testimonials * Conclusion Add a couple of images throughout and away you go. You need to try and make the visitor feel as though your recommending the product instead of selling it Hope that helps
It's too confusing. You need to direct your visitor in a path, don't just lay out a bunch of information all over the place. I'm afraid most people will see this and think it's a mess and just close the page.
Hey man I would be willing to help you out here to me it just looks very unprofessional and I wouldnt be wanting to buy anything from that website no offence but first impressions count. I can create the html page for you and then its just a matter of you uploading it to your website. PM me or get back to me if you want me to help
As the other guys here have said you don't have much flow and the design is poor. Check out this site for some tips on creating a good landing page: http://zacjohnson.com/create-killer-landing-pages-free-template/
Upon first viewing it does all seem a bit on top of its self, but nothing a good tidy up wouldn't sort out. The whole point of the first landing page is that you can build and learn from it. Personally I simply spent hours looking at how other people had their pages set up and sort of emulated some of the one's I thought looked most professional and best suited for my product. I also gained a lot of experience about layout by creating Squidoo lenses. These can certainly be a great learning ground, prior to going for the big website. Well whatever you decide to do I wish you every success... Kind Regards Clive Anderson
I don't think there is necessarily anything wrong with the content of the site(granted I didn't read one word of it). It's just structured improperly in firefox.