My first landing page (Alpha 1.0)...

Discussion in 'Pay Per Click Advertising' started by malcolmlo, Mar 6, 2007.

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    This isnt even live yet, so I have no actual metrics. Just want to get some feedback.

    Will be focused on Microsoft SharePoint related keywords.

    So far the feedback ive gotten internally at work is...not so great.

    http://www.hensongroup.com/landing/microsoft-sharepoint-services2.html

    Go ahead, rip it apart ive already been torn into at work so ive got a thick skin ;-)
     
    malcolmlo, Mar 6, 2007 IP
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    forgot to mention. Still waiting on some content from one of my colleagues for the services section. So youll notice there are some blanks there. Each one will have a 1-3 sentance short explanation.
     
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    no feedback?
     
    malcolmlo, Mar 7, 2007 IP
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    If it is supposed to be a landing page for PPC, I'm missing the call for action... and the page is very long...

    ...just my 2c
     
    maliboo, Mar 7, 2007 IP