My first ever flash game

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  2. vwdforum

    vwdforum Well-Known Member

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    well done, its a start and a pretty good game
     
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    It needs a place for the user to go before they play. I have no idea what I'm meant to be doing or how to do it because there's no instructions. The replay button isn't right, depending on where you mouse over it, it isn't clickable. Good effort.
     
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    Once I figured it out it was kind of fun, some instructions would have ben nice.
     
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    The layout and design looks great but I agree with the previous posters I think
    you should have some instructions on how to play the game.
     
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    buffalo likes this.
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    Not bad for a first game. Try making the plane gradually slow down when you release a directional key.
     
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    not bad, i know my first game was like crap, but it's simple text game :)
    I like it, just keep adding new features on to it
    you will soon have lot of people playing it

    keep up with that game
     
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    Good job!

    IMO, if it has a level or just the beginner, normal, expert options, it would be better. When I played it, there are stars that are fast and some are slow.
     
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    Thanks for the tips, If you have a look now there's 3 difficulty settings :)
     
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    Its pretty addictive, well done.
     
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    not bad for first flash game, I'm sure you can make it even better :) Are you developing this directly in Flash?

    I'm working on flash game my self but I am using Flex 3 and ActionScript 3 and smartfoxserver so my first flash game will be multiplayer. It's really fun to learning how to put it all together. I'm sure you are having fun too making your first game :)
     
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    very good job.. I collected 10 stars in my first try and 26 in the second...very addictive ;)
     
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    It's much better with the changes. Maybe you should put 'Move your place with the arrow keys' on the first part aswell. Other than that, looking good. You could also add high scores!
     
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    I like this game for a short while but after a bit it gets a bit boring but for your first game its very good.
     
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    cool i wish i could make games to
    itsw a good one if its your first
     
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    Good job for you first flash game. it's very addictive, well done.
     
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    I dont know much about it but it looks good
     
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    I can't help but to play it again ;)
     
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