My First Ever Blog

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by UltimateOnline, Mar 1, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi i have created my first ever wordpress blog.

    Can you please review it
    www.prisonservice.info

    Information on the Prison Service

    Thanks
    p.s i can't seem to get the RSS Feed to work :(
     
    UltimateOnline, Mar 1, 2008 IP
  2. pipsbank

    pipsbank Banned

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    #2
    how about combining the adsense ads inside the post. it will blend better
     
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  3. Maxiorel

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    #3
    hm... Too much empty space in right column.
     
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  4. UltimateOnline

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    #4
    Ok i have changed the adsense placement
    cheers
     
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  5. UltimateOnline

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    #5

    Got any tips on how to fill it. I'm new to wordpress :confused:
     
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  6. xcelent88

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    #6
    Very nice blog, but try to change the design of your logo and add more graphics. ;)
     
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    #7
    Look's nice, but could use a nice header, banner.

    Good luck!
     
    Manx101, Mar 1, 2008 IP
  8. me4you

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    #8
    good looking, keeping. all the best.

    Thanks.
     
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    #9
    It looks fine, but this theme, and similar themes are overused way too much so I'd recommend getting a new theme or hire a designer to stand out from the hundreds of other blogs out there that look the same.
     
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  10. UltimateOnline

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    Ok i will have a look at what i can do, thanks
     
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    #11
    Either shorten your blog so their isnt a blank right hand column or put ads or some content thier like widgets or other amusing objects that attract viewers. waste of space that right hand column
    Other than that nice blog
     
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  12. buzyfrog

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    #12
    Looks good i havnt seen to many sites like this one..

    One thing, the exercise gym in Chelmsford Prison seems better then the gym i go to...what happened to punishing prisoners ???..anyway thats off topic.

    The sites got interesting information, looks well put together
     
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    #13
    Nice blog and match theme.

    But I saw an error with your feed (on your right sidebar).
     
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  14. UltimateOnline

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    I cant seem to get the RSS Feed to work :(
     
    UltimateOnline, Mar 2, 2008 IP
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    #15
    Good blogging content there, Nice.
     
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  16. UltimateOnline

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    Thank you eng152, I try and update the content every day to make it fresh
     
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    #17
    Maybe change the Font of the Header?
     
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  18. UltimateOnline

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    #18
    I want to change the header but don't know how to i have a logo ready to put on.

    and i understand i need to go to templates folder and the header.php but thats where i get stuck not sure what to do :(
     
    UltimateOnline, Mar 2, 2008 IP