My First Creation

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by Topunit, Mar 26, 2009.

  1. #1
    Please give me feedback on my first Photoshop creation - a web design.

    http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/8199/somearcade.png
     
    Topunit, Mar 26, 2009 IP
  2. iloveeverything

    iloveeverything Peon

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    That is nice. It looks like you have been using photoshop for awhile.
     
    iloveeverything, Mar 26, 2009 IP
  3. f_csaby

    f_csaby Banned

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    I think, if this will coded for wordpress, it will be a good theme. It's a simple creation, but for begining it's really nice!
     
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  4. Topunit

    Topunit Peon

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    Thanks for the feedback! I plan to code my own system.
     
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  5. StrangeLife

    StrangeLife Well-Known Member

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    #5
    Thats a hell of a lot better than my first one, infact i went from making flash games to flash websites to html to wordpress over a 5 year period, i made my design breakthrough when i turned to the web for colour schemes, this site is the nuts! http://www.colorcombos.com/

    :)
     
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  6. jgro1413

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    #6
    Looks pretty cool man.
     
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  7. Website Tiger

    Website Tiger Guest

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    #7
    Very good template/layout but try using different colors, the design seems little too much blue.
     
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  8. holden

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    #8
    agree with tiger try using 2-3 colors on a design to give contrast abit :)

    but really nice for a start ;)
     
    holden, Mar 26, 2009 IP
  9. dezigngeek

    dezigngeek Greenhorn

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    #9
    well done...it's looking ok,but for a start its really fine..You can improve with time and build better one's

    Good luck :)
     
    dezigngeek, Mar 26, 2009 IP
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    #10
    nice work.... keep it up..
     
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  11. perfectchoice

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    #11
    Hi Topunit
    Thats a nice layout you have got out there and the color shoice is also good. just a tip will be for you to

    > use some other color for your font
    > and when you are having a gradient try to make it in the blue you have and some other lighter blue rather than using white completely

    Hope this wil help overall its a 8/10 for a starter
     
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  12. Topunit

    Topunit Peon

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    Thanks everyone. I did have trouble finding good combinations of color. Thanks for the link, StrangeLife. Thanks for the tips, perfectchoice.
     
    Topunit, Mar 27, 2009 IP
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    #13
    I suggest the background could be lighter/ lighter blue.
     
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  14. m3rlinez

    m3rlinez Peon

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    #14
    The Design is nice! But I think the color of font is a bit hard to read since the blue color of them blends with the blue background.

    Keep up the good works! :)
     
    m3rlinez, Mar 29, 2009 IP
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    #15
    doesn't look original to me
     
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    #16
    I'll have to agree... bit of a blue overload. soften the background and add a little color to highlight the content.

    Very nice for your first design though.
     
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  17. PaceSolutions

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    #17
    Very nice begining,,,,keep it up untill perfection:)
     
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    #18
    Nice bro,Keep it up
     
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    #19
    Nice man!
    But the fonts are difficult to read. Use some white color for them
    Else very good

    Thanks
     
    Lizamaria, Mar 29, 2009 IP
  20. vinogradov

    vinogradov Active Member

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    #20
    Wow, not bad at all, soon you will make masterpieces!
     
    vinogradov, Mar 29, 2009 IP