My First commercial

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    tbarr60 Notable Member

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    Where will you run this commercial? It's too long for TV and probably too long for Adwords video ads. You could probably eliminate the blue screen of text (I am guessing this is a Mac thing) and the font is too YouTube.

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    oceanline Active Member

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    Actually just a commercial for my website, youtube and other video places. For the blue screen on text, I'm just using the free windows movie maker and dont really know how to do everything yet.

    Thanks!
     
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    I'd tighten up the time a bit and it should be a good first shot.

    Hmmmm, I had heard Macs were the easy ones for making movies so I assumed all those vids were from Macs. :D
     
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    it's way too long and not catchy at all. I mean, I had to force myself to watch it to the end and it didn't really made me want to type in your site to visit it. You should make it shorter and put in some more spectacullar scenes
     
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