The page is here >>> http://instantfirstpagetraffic.com/ Not active yet. Will go live in 5 days or so. Simply put it is an ebook a guide on how one can achieve first page of Google for some kind of keywords getting traffic and sales. I wrote it out of my own experience. Of course I did not make millions but few thousands with this very system on Clickbank. Give me your ideas guys. Also I do not know the guidelines of CB vendors. What is the condition that they will not approve products? Where can I get these pages for Earnings Disclaimer, terms and Privacy Policy? Can I copy and paste it on my page? Are they "must have?"
OK... Hi, I've checked the salespage and noticed some thing... If you really want to catch the buyer's eye, you'll need to break the paragraphs down. Never use more than 3-4 sentences per paragraph. That's the #1 thing... #2 - No colors? No Bold words? There are only two bold phrases. Why that? You need to grab buyers attention. And I would suggest you to write a little bit more about sentences, since it looks very decent. #3 - No images... I don't thing it's very difficult to take a screenshot of a Google page and than to draw some red arrows to point out FIRST PAGE OF GOOGLE #4 - What will you get? Look at the letters after Module1, Module2, Module3. I can't see capital letters.. This can change a lot. In addition you have to BOLD the benefit of the module to stand out. You want the buyer to see what the module is about immediately. #5 - I wouldn't write the first sentence like this: "If you want to see real money in your account for the first time then listen to what I would like to tell you." In my opinion that's too selly. It seems like you really want to sell that stuff.. These are just a few that have come up to my head. If you want to go more in details, than PM. And the disclaimer. I would type "Disclaimer" in Google and than once you've found something that would fit your website rewrite it slightly. Bear in mind, I'm not a lawyer and not sure if this is OK. But this is what I do and many other do. Hope it Helped....
Oh thank you man! But I didn't want to make it hyipy or extremely bold claims. You know what I mean? I am glad you gave me some ideas and I will implement some. thx.
No problem, than let me know how the site looks like after implementing some of the tips. I know what you mean by "I didn't want to make it hyipy"... But just to consider that there are different readers and some may skim the text, some may read entire text. It would be good if you just point out some phrases to make it catchy for skimmers. That's it.. Hope it helps..
Now you got it- the price. Adding things step by step but will soon go live in a matter of days. Watch out guys.
Yap......I also have the same opinion about sales page that "conversion will be poor" because of the simplicity of sales page.
I would say you really need to add more great content near the top of your page More Module Points if you can Most website oversale there product or service Check out some of the top selling page on Clickbank
Ya. Definitely. But I do not of course want to make it over hyped up sales page. But will make the changes anyway. If any of you guys have a killer bonus then send me the link. Thanks.
The sales page is simple but a video demo would have been an advantage to you and the visitor to know about the product.
Yea problem with this sales page is that it's in the "internet marketing/make money online" niche, and that's an extremely hyperactive niche where people are greatly accustomed to seeing sales pages and it takes more for a sales page to be effective at selling, check out any of the recent product launches in the IM/MMO niche, yea, they are hypey, but they in fact have a great overal layout and content (text, images, benefits, claims, proof etc)
A little bit of Jazz added. Obvously I do not want it to be too hypey. Will also edit the sales letter. See you soon.