My first blog

check out http://getloans.blogspot.com/

let me know how to imprive it further.

 

what kind of review you want for your this kind of site ?

there's nothing much to offer on your site, and the blogger template doesnt really suit your topic anyway

1 and only impression, adsense ...

 

Agree with Nystul...

I dont like the big font at the top and you are making the adsense a bit obvious, try blending it in more.

Also try looking for another template.

Just my opinion

Good luck

 

Fix font size, it should be the same for all post.

 

good going!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
good luck

 

Make you google ads white and make the font colours of it the same as your titles on your blog get more clicks and dont make it a leaderboard make it a rectangle or something. Blend it into the site so it looks like normal content!

 

i like some parts like the look but its hard to really look around and kinda busy.

 

Look, buddy, you need content for this site. With just two posts you can't reasonably hope to get traffic and keep getting it back over and over again.
You have to offer something which is unique. Your site, as of now, has nothing unique to offer. You have to captivate your readers and keep them coming back, and thats how you build an audience.
As for the template, it doesn't suit your topic, imho. And the adsense ads are too blatant, of in-your-face variety.
And how do you plan to get traffic? Insurance is a highly competitive term in Search engines, and so it won't be easy ranking high in any search engine.
I'd suggest either building lots and lots of useful, unique content for this site. Then spread the word and optimize your site for your specific keywords. Then watch the traffic roll in. But firstly, build lots of content. If you can't, then drop the idea.
It is impossible to stress the importance of content.
Anyway, best of luck to you, my friend

 

lack of content and i don't find any valuable information there!!!

is a waste of blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Have a look at my debt site

debteducation.blogspot.com

You need more content!!!!

 

If you call this good informative feedback to a site i pitty you. You should try and give him tips on how to improve it he didnt want this kind of comments. He would probably appreciate more nicer and informative feedback.

Dude keep adding more content and change the design to something basic and it will look grand

 

sorry but i was just trying to convince him that he needs content!!!

Come on Critics are always your best friends.......

i have seen his other posts at http://alltheinternetmarketingresources.blogspot.com/
he is definately capable of what this http://getloans.blogspot.com/ post shows.

you need to work hard james