My first blog post now what?

K so i got my first blog post
here is my site, add any opinions you have

http://internettvsatelite.blogspot.com/

Code (markup):

 

I won't sugar coat it.

It looks tacky, lose the polka dots. They could work as a background but you would have to have a solid colour as the main body. Keep it simple.

Put the intro text at the top, then the picture don't wrap the text around it, makes it hard to read.

Don't try to sell them anything too much on your landing page. You have written part of it as if you are a happy customer which is fine, but don't say things like GET IT NOW!!!. Try for more information on (insert product name here) click here. Or something like that.

Either that or just explain in your post what the product does/is about and then link to the product. The landing page is just to warm people up it's not a hard sell.

Hope some of this helps.

 

yuck,

go to blogger templates or something and find something that looks better.

 

LoL. I actually think that landing page could sell if you promoted the holy hell out of it. But yes, could be better. You've got the basic idea down, though.

 

I just need ways to promote my site, i suck at that.
Btw, thanks for all your opinions means a lot.

 

You need to Edit,After making Attractive blog promote it you will make sales.

 

I think you could do very well if you fix it up, it looks like you have the heart and drive to make some money as an affiliate...

One thing you should do is look at some blogs around the internet that is selling clickbank products and get a general idea of what you should be after.

Best success to you my friend