My first Blog Post - Need to be Reviewed

Hi guys i just wrote a blog post for my first blog and i want you guys to give me some comments on how i can improve more on this writing stuff or the overall look of the design etc.

here is the url :

Blog

waiting for your responses.

 

WidgetBux Post:

It's okay, include your referral id in your blog posts if your serious about making money.

Also make sure to update it with what your thoughts were on WB and how much you made.

Overall the post wasn't informative, tell me what WidgetBucks is and what is different about it, your blogs theme is making money, tell me how I can make money with it.

You just need more details, and it would be perfect.

 

Thank you so much for the informative post you just made

I was looking for the keywords you just gave me, i will be updating my post with the things you gave me to put on.

Thanks again

 

nice. i would use a lower font size. that's it.

 

It's looking pretty good so far but you'll definitely have to decrease the font size.. It looks a bit unprofessional and I recommend decreasing it.

Cheers,

Joe

 

Thanks for the tip

Sorry actually i was changing or playing with css

well is it ok now ?