My first blog , feedback please...

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    This is my first time publishing a blog post. I was wondering if you guys could give me some feedback/comments on it


    http://zapmm.com/?p=3


    thanks , stefan.
     
    stefanlyl, Aug 25, 2007 IP
  2. Cheap SEO Services

    Cheap SEO Services <------DoFollow Backlinks

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    I suggest you get yourself a spell checking tool.

    Otherwise, it is acceptable.

    Col :)
     
    Cheap SEO Services, Aug 25, 2007 IP
  3. urbanchaos.in

    urbanchaos.in Banned

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    #3
    Really the design is very good.One Suggestion from is is that have logo or banner at the top
     
    urbanchaos.in, Aug 26, 2007 IP
  4. Lethal7

    Lethal7 Active Member

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    #4
    im liking the design similar to mine in some parts.

    nicely done :D
     
    Lethal7, Aug 26, 2007 IP
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    #5
    cderrs.blogspot.com

    i like your blog :p id also suggest a banner. Could you guys comment on mine please?
     
    cderrs, Aug 26, 2007 IP
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    nvidura Well-Known Member

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    #6
    hmmm you have come up with a very, i mean really good design. i like the design..
     
    nvidura, Aug 26, 2007 IP
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    muhammad arif Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Ya ur blog seems well loads quickly and pretty interesting colours are used.Really they are very nice.
     
    muhammad arif, Aug 26, 2007 IP
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    #8
    i like it =)
     
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    #9
    It's a pretty nice design ;) not unique though?

    You might want to change your permalinks so they show keywords instead of ?p=3 , it's better SEO-wise that way
     
    8everything, Aug 26, 2007 IP
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    stefanlyl Well-Known Member

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    #10
    ya i was told to do that , but how do you ?
     
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    I like it, but I don't suppose you can move your content up a little? I left your page up on my laptop here for awhile, and every time I walked by, the first thing that I noticed every time were your jet streaks at the top. It might be best to move it up, but that's imho. Otherwise, I think it's great. Have fun writing!
     
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    I liked the design and some of the information on the blog itself was pretty good. I think maybe it needs a little something to distinguish it from all the other blogs, like a design or pic.
     
    adfodo, Aug 26, 2007 IP