My first attempt...What do you think?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by fire228, Aug 28, 2011.

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    fire228, Aug 28, 2011 IP
  2. julialb

    julialb Greenhorn

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    #2
    Thats an agressive profile picture you've got there fire228
     
    julialb, Aug 30, 2011 IP
  3. Gangakarthik

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    #3
    really your attempt is great
     
    Gangakarthik, Aug 31, 2011 IP
  4. fire228

    fire228 Active Member

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    Thanks!!!!!!
     
    fire228, Sep 1, 2011 IP
  5. monkeyweb

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    #5
    Site is looking pretty good specially if that's your first site. Seems to me that you are monetizing with just adsense. When you get more traffic, you could add some affiliate links to those products and maybe you get some sales of that too. If you do it, it would be good to make the articles a little bit of more appealing with bolding etc but don't worry about that now.

    Also of ranking point of view. You should set the front page to show a little bit of more of those articles. Now there is only a very short snippet of articles but I know that you can rank better if you show something like 10k words in fron page. Well at least make the snippets to show a little bit more of each articles.

    Study some on-page SEO stuff but don't over do it. Like H1 tags and so on (you don't have one now).

    Good luck!
     
    monkeyweb, Sep 1, 2011 IP
  6. jaypala

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    It is good,but can become better if you add some of the videos, it will be more effective.
     
    jaypala, Sep 2, 2011 IP
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    I think that you are doing just fine keep up to good work.
     
    serena85, Sep 2, 2011 IP
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    sisatel Active Member

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    #8
    This is good. Keep it up.
     
    sisatel, Sep 2, 2011 IP
  9. Wulkanen

    Wulkanen Well-Known Member

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    BAD BAD BAD BAD!

    Delete your content or you will never get anywhere.
    Your content is just taken from other websites (or PLR)...
    Google will laugh at your website and slap it to the bottom of the search results.

    It really shows how new and unexperienced you are.

    The wordpress theme is fine though. But you should change your link structure.
     
    Wulkanen, Sep 2, 2011 IP
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    dlinchevskiy Active Member

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    Very good post formatting and content. Dont forget to add some post at /Popular/ category.
     
    dlinchevskiy, Sep 2, 2011 IP
  11. kamran akhtar

    kamran akhtar Greenhorn

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    #11
    please some post popular food supplement, but well done
     
    kamran akhtar, Jan 16, 2012 IP