looks very nice for a first attempt! Personally; I would use a black - greyish background for a gaming site / or related good job though - thumbs up cheers,
Meh it's an average. I'll be nice and give you a small advice though: Remove the small watermark underneath the site "Arthemia theme by Michael Hutagalung" <<<
Nice looking theme and layout. Click through rate will be very low, however, without a visitor benefit Headline. I would Headline the primary benefit for the reader to stay on the site, above the video, instead of the ad. People will click away fast if all they see is advertisements, when they want content.
Looks great but I'm not a big fan of the page break. Full Tilt Poker Site Summery (Summary is spelled wrong). OMG water boat page doesn't load in my Firefox. Not sure what breast milk has to do with Poker.
is this your first website?, i don't think so, you look very professional in web design.. good job bro..