My Ebook Sales Page

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by topnotchcomedy, Nov 12, 2007.

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    www.unethicalebook.com


    After a few months of putting together the most ridiculous unethical money making ideas - and then test driving them to make sure they're good enough for a book I've banged out the book and a sales page.


    I'd love some feedback, thanks DPers
     
    topnotchcomedy, Nov 12, 2007 IP
  2. bazza23

    bazza23 Peon

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    Too much text with yellow background. The sales letter is also a bit short and you'll also need some testimonials and a money back guarantee before people are going to cough up the $37.
     
    bazza23, Nov 12, 2007 IP
  3. topnotchcomedy

    topnotchcomedy Banned

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    I changed some of the Yellow text to say comes with a 100% money back guarantee

    I really don't want a long sales page - and stuffing testimonials on there never got me to buy anything more.
     
    topnotchcomedy, Nov 12, 2007 IP
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    bquast Active Member

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    looks just like every other ebook page, I hate the use of the bright color's that they use, the banner at the top looks like it was made by a 3 year old sorry but I dislike this page.
     
    bquast, Nov 12, 2007 IP
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    topnotchcomedy Banned

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    I thought I'd imitate the other ebook sales pages a little - they're doing something right
     
    topnotchcomedy, Nov 12, 2007 IP