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Discussion in 'Graphics & Multimedia' started by webdesigner2161, Dec 4, 2007.

  1. #1
    hi,


    Please, let my know your personal view about my design, here:

    http://www.glocality-business.com/
    http://www.glocality-business.com/colon-cleanse.html


    Just any comments will be welcome :)


    Best.......................
     
    webdesigner2161, Dec 4, 2007 IP
  2. SVargo

    SVargo Guest

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    Hey.
    Im sorry.. But to be honest with you.

    The design in general.
    The design doesn't look so good. I don't really like the color scheme.
    Some other green might do it, but that gradient in the back just hurt my eyes when I scroll down.

    Header
    Uhm.. The header could be something more eye-catching.. The colors on the text doesn't fit at all to the green.

    Buttons
    I think the design of the buttons could be somewhat more shiny, reflecting or something. They just look flat and doesn't fit overall with the design.

    A tip for you, that works for me. Is that dont work with too many colors, unless they match. Because on this site you got: red, blue, orange, green, white, black, lime, light blue. And in most cases, these colors doesn't look too good with eachother. Unless you really know what you're doing.

    Well, this was my opinion. Hope it helps you. This was just constructive critique. :)

    Simon
     
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    webdesigner2161 Banned

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    Okay, though I did not receive many views, thanks for your comments :)
    But, just, I want to say I'm not too convenced with your opinions..
    My customers are more than sutisfied with my design. In fact, it depends on the "Topic" you work on. I made it sort out from the similar boring design out there..


    Thanks,
    David
     
    webdesigner2161, Dec 5, 2007 IP
  5. reezluv

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    If I can rate your design..I will give you just 3/10 for that design..looks for something like 2.0 design..and get more attractive design with nice color combination....use gradient..make it glossy..that will help you most..:D
     
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    webdesigner2161 Banned

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    #6
    Hi,

    I apreciate and respect your opinion. But, when you try to give a Note for any design, it will be totally wrong! Because, simply, we can improve it, but we can not say: 0/10 1/10 2/10 3/10 ........ 10/10.. Any way it's your own view:rolleyes:
     
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    reezluv Active Member

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    yeah..i'm always rate of any design..there will be a great design there..if you're good..I will give 10/10 of course..:)

    I'm also still learning to improve my design..so let's practice..practice make perfect!:D

    cheers..
     
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    webdesigner2161 Banned

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    #8
    Okay. That is the key! >> "practice make perfect!"

    But, the 0/10 ... 10/10 Note, will Stop your Creativity:( So just Improve :)



    Best...........
     
    webdesigner2161, Dec 5, 2007 IP
  9. squarehippies

    squarehippies Peon

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    Well, you shouldn't put too many large block of images on the homepage. I understand you wanted to feature all your designs but I would suggest make them in thumbnail size then link to their individual pages. I'm no expert but it looks like a generic ebook marketing website out there. :)
     
    squarehippies, Dec 6, 2007 IP
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    #10
    Yes Right, It's for Internet Marketers :)
    And I know it missed many touches, but no problem, as I'm now concentrated on my Beg New Design Package ;-)


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    webdesigner2161, Dec 8, 2007 IP