My design seems a bit off. Dunno why exactly...

Discussion in 'Design' started by skible, May 27, 2014.

  1. #1
    Hi, I was bored and designed a PSD template. Though, there seems to be something off about it. Can't figure out what exactly.
    Note: Everything on it has been made up. Like I said, I did this out of boredom. Thank you for any feedback!

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    skible, May 27, 2014 IP
  2. nostressmaven

    nostressmaven Well-Known Member

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    BROWN- get rid of it. Doesn't say party, doesn't invite party, does not get me excited at all... your header pic needs some help too... make the people's faces be viewable. People love to see their face, love to see eyes... having a girls pic looking right at you making eye contact will draw people in as well...
     
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  3. skible

    skible Member

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    Thank you for your feedback, I have changed a couple of things (complete color scheme, picture etc). Hope this is better. I like it more than previous. Again thanks for the tips!
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    skible, May 28, 2014 IP
  4. nostressmaven

    nostressmaven Well-Known Member

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    Looks better!
     
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  5. sweetpea69

    sweetpea69 Active Member

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    lol, I think it looked better when the banner image was blurred. Not to sound like an ass, but the girls in that picture are nasty, look drugged outtt, and don't look like they are having the greatest time. Not inviting at all. The colors look better tho.
     
    sweetpea69, May 28, 2014 IP
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    roberis Well-Known Member

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    Bad white space - spaces between elements have no relation at all (for example spaces between text lines).
    Also some elements are too small, some to big. Triangles are too big. Where is no harmony in size. Colors are dull. Also lacks detail.
     
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    Nice wild party design. Congrats, man. Boredom rules!
     
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    UIDynamics Greenhorn

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    Choosing a right color palette will improve it lot :)
     
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