My business Plan

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by mattonline, Mar 30, 2007.

  1. #1
    Ok i have created a business plan for a school project which is a driving school in my local area Cardiff, UK
    and as i'm not going to be opening up a driving school i thought i may as well publish it to you guys to look at other wise it will go to waste.

    I have only allowed a 'Sample' to be viewed here

    and if you like what your reading you can view the Full version Free, here

    The catch.. You must first register to view the full lengh document.

    I may as well get something out off this.


    But theres my Business plan any feedback posting in this thread or the one on my forum will be of a great help

    thanks for looking

    (Plan is about 110Pages in length)
     
    mattonline, Mar 30, 2007 IP
  2. mattonline

    mattonline Active Member

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    Should i of posted this in the General Business section also. or would that be spamming...
     
    mattonline, Mar 30, 2007 IP
  3. outshineworld

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    #3
    you should have uploaded it on some other server.
    btw: i have registered there.let me read it and i will be able to throw some comments.
     
    outshineworld, Mar 31, 2007 IP
  4. mattonline

    mattonline Active Member

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    thanks for reading.
     
    mattonline, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  5. mattonline

    mattonline Active Member

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    i've updated the business plan, less mistakes.
     
    mattonline, Apr 8, 2007 IP
  6. Hecky

    Hecky Like a Dungeon Dragon!

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    Fewer Mistakes :p
     
    Hecky, Apr 11, 2007 IP
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    I'm having a problem. Seems that every other word is "I". By using the word "we" it would imply that something is larger than yourself. Just my thoughts
     
    tmcca, Apr 11, 2007 IP
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    That would be the case if there was a need to include anyone else, he's talking about what he has made.
     
    Hecky, Apr 11, 2007 IP