My beautiful beauty site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by rakker126, Mar 13, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi all,

    I' ve just made www.beautybodysite.com
    I' ve hired some writers for it and i handled the meta tags and the intro myself (i' m Dutch). I was wondering what you think about the site: does it have nice information?

    I went for a clean and easy design, so it' s easy to navigate and you will nog get distracted easily.

    Please review the site :)
     
    rakker126, Mar 13, 2010 IP
  2. deyounggerry

    deyounggerry Peon

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    I really didn't find the site beautiful myself. You need a header with a logo or image or something. I didn't care for the ad placement, just doesn't look good to me. As far as your meta tags you could use a primer on how these tags are supposed to work. Looking at your "keywords", I don't find any of them in the title or description. Please inform me as to what keyword phrases you are looking to rank for and I can steer you in the right direction. I think you still have a lot of work to do on the site as far as aesthetics and SEO. You might send me a PM to see what we can do.
     
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  3. patrikd

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    #3
    very simple i think it`s like demo in any programs
     
    patrikd, Mar 13, 2010 IP
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    but "beautiful beauty site" make me smile)
     
    patrikd, Mar 13, 2010 IP
  5. dirocket

    dirocket Well-Known Member

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    #5
    hey dude your site is good but lots of things are missing like logo,change your header colour
     
    dirocket, Mar 13, 2010 IP
  6. BaussDesigns

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    #6
    Site doesn't desrve the URL part beautiful :D

    Needs great effort from you to make this thing look good.
     
    BaussDesigns, Mar 13, 2010 IP
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    Unfortunately, "clean and easy design" didn't quite work out. The blocks of text and ads on the page make the whole thing look really cluttered.
     
    Ennovative, Mar 13, 2010 IP
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    too much text, need some "beauty"
     
    rr1958, Mar 13, 2010 IP