my articles on ezine what do you think?

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  2. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    You don't write articles to get sales, you write them to make them rank in SE's result pages. Then when you get top positions, you should be receiving good targeted traffic to your landing page.

    That's when you make sales. So check out if you are dominating any keywords.
     
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    The article itself looks nice, and you've got some good little facts and opinions.. the only thing that strikes me, the domain?

    Does it stand for anything? I think it lets the article down, if I saw that I would be a little confused, im sure you could find a good water related .com? And you need one sale to cover the cost of the domain lol.

    Anyway good luck.
     
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    Dude here’s a tip for your landing page: text needs to be on white background it converts better, change your domain, change it to a review page.
     
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    I totally agree, man that domains sucks, sorry to be honest, but it does, you need something related to what you're promoting, or at least something generic like : YourTopReviews.com or whatever.
     
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    Hi,

    First off, the article sounds like it was writen by Borat. I guess English isn't your first language, but you can improve your writing by doing more reading - of books & magazines etc, NOT other EzineArticles ;) If your article reads badly and is full of bad grammar, then it won't inspire confidence.

    (As an aside, I'm surprised this was accepted, given that EA claim to review manually...)

    The structure and length of the article are good, IMO. :)

    Your resource box is bad. You should have "Water Driven Car" as your anchor text - not "Visit Site".

    Good luck with it anyway.

    Cheers
    Zander
     
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