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my 1st ever logo..need reviews and advices

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by krishvind, Sep 13, 2010.

  1. krishvind

    krishvind Peon

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    #41
    @bryan88-thanks..

    @Evo-D-thanks for the advice..really appreciated it.. i wil try using those softwares.. currently i am learning from tutorials.. can u suggest to me and best tutorial sites..i found few but its not that good..

    @Griggs117- note it.. thanks for the comment..

    @fgirtan-do you mean the back line behind the J Soft?

    @Natinho- hmm.. i dont actually understand what u r saying..sorry to say that i'm really a new face to designing..can u b more specific?

    @karan khetan- thanks man..

    @logoonlinepros- thanks for the support..can u suggest few way/advice/idea to me to become a much more good designer?

    @realgroupspeak-thanks man..
     
    krishvind, Oct 28, 2010 IP
  2. DNH

    DNH Peon

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    #42
    Hello Krishvind,

    Graphic design... There are two different "design-persons", the ones that know how to design and the one that only knows how to work with Photoshop and calls himself a graphic designer.
    You're a bit of both.

    I notice your mass use of photoshop effects. I see: outer glow, bevel and emboss, stroke, inner shadow, drop shadow. In short, almost all layer styles.
    Correct me if I'm wrong, but you're a young person. But doing good.

    I see a potential designer, your typography, use of color and the way the curve flows, all signs of creativity.

    Keep it up, but easy on the effects. Search inspiration around you. Permanently take a pencil and some paper with you.

    Maybe you'll like Logopond (google it)

    Sincerely,

    DNH
     
    DNH, Oct 28, 2010 IP
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  3. krishvind

    krishvind Peon

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    #43
    @DNH- Really thanks for ur advice. From reading ur comment,i'm caring a paper and pencil along with me.. I managed to draw a few logos and shapes.

    What u said were correct,on my mass use of photoshop effects. I wil b posting a simple logo created in photoshop soon, I wil create the same logo again in coreldraw.

    I jus wan u to let me know if i have done any mistake in the logo...

    By the way do you have any other software to recommend me.. currently i'm learning to use Coreldraw..
     
    krishvind, Oct 29, 2010 IP
  4. DNH

    DNH Peon

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    #44
    Remember, don't force yourself to draw.
    Of course you didn't make any mistakes.
    I didn't give you the job to make it, so it's perfect the way you want it to be.
    Just imagine this logo on a piece of papier or on a businesscard.
    Personally the way you tried to bring 3D into it, I dislike it. It's not the future. Less is more.
    Stay with Adobe software, Photoshop & Illustrator. Uninstall Coreldraw.
     
    DNH, Oct 29, 2010 IP
  5. krishvind

    krishvind Peon

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    @DNH- what do u mean by "Its not the future. Less is more..?
     
    krishvind, Oct 29, 2010 IP
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    DNH Peon

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    #46
    It's not the future = trying to change a 2D product (in this case your logo) into 3D
    Less is more = simplicity is the key. You want your logo to reach people, to stay in their minds. Using a curve, a circle, 6 photoshop effects, different colors, it's all too much. Again: less is more. By designing/producing/showing less, you achieve more.
     
    DNH, Oct 29, 2010 IP
  7. krishvind

    krishvind Peon

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    @DNH- Oh. Now i understand what does that actually means. Learn another thing from u. Thanks..wil remember it also..
     
    krishvind, Oct 29, 2010 IP
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    hackimos Greenhorn

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    #48
    nice logo, but the green needs to be less brighter
     
    hackimos, Oct 29, 2010 IP
  9. krishvind

    krishvind Peon

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    @hackimos- thanks.. wil remember the brightness of color next time..
     
    krishvind, Oct 30, 2010 IP
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    #50
    Ya really nice job has been done by you.The logo was really looking great and green colour is looking very graceful in context with the black it was coming out with nice and attractive nature.keep up the good work.All the best.thanks
     
    Jaswinder singh, Oct 31, 2010 IP
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    #51
    Just practise and you can do it better...
     
    Dusanm, Nov 1, 2010 IP
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    #52
    Overall, it's nice. But you also need to incorporate the nature of the products or services into the logo to make it more appropriate.
     
    P.Ackroyd, Nov 1, 2010 IP
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    #53
    if background color is white then its look more pretty :)
     
    mindblaster, Nov 3, 2010 IP
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    BRIDEN Greenhorn

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    #54
    Using same color in background and in-design, make limit the entire usage. Always use some contrasted colors.

    Hope it will help.
    Thanks !
     
    BRIDEN, Nov 4, 2010 IP
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    #55
    It is not looking like a first time logo :) Good job!
     
    pass1meister, Nov 8, 2010 IP
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    #56
    green color is great but what would be the back ground color
     
    smart_ladoo, Nov 11, 2010 IP
  17. krishvind

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    #57
    thx all for the comment..will work on more logo soon, once my desktop is reformatted...:(
     
    krishvind, Nov 30, 2010 IP
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    #58
    For the first time it is way better than my first one... LOL
     
    XtremePM, Nov 30, 2010 IP
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    #59
    Pretty cool logo, nice work
     
    Raymondb25, Dec 1, 2010 IP
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    #60
    I'm not a designer at all..
    But I really appreciate your work, it touched :)
    Good luck...
     
    homeworker11, Dec 3, 2010 IP