Mock up 2 design for Women apparel website landing page

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by SeoQuickHeal, Nov 26, 2014.

  1. #1
    hi,

    there check this landing page and share your views.

    thanks

    single order.jpg
     
    SeoQuickHeal, Nov 26, 2014 IP
  2. prince@life

    prince@life Notable Member

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    - What is the basic width of that landing page?
    - Footer is messed up a little bit! (Make those texts to follow a grid : "Follow us" text, "stay connected" text)
    - Decrease the font size of the footer.
    - Make an attractive Add to wishlist and cart buttons, So, users can deal with it in an easy way!
    - All you need to focus on the better typography of your website too. Use at-least two fonts for your site. I mean 1) Fonts for headings, 2) Font for texts .

    I know it's just a wire-frame and as you know, every sketch indicates too many useful things about an upcoming website!
     
    prince@life, Nov 28, 2014 IP
  3. Naina S

    Naina S Active Member

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    Looks good, i thing your website is in wordpress.
    Just few changes i will suggest, adding wishlist plugin, make font size of footer links smaller and decrease the space between them.
    Receive OUR EMAILS should be in smaller font too.
     
    Naina S, Nov 29, 2014 IP
  4. deathshadow

    deathshadow Acclaimed Member

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    Serif fonts on screen are a pretty big accessibility issue -- since most screen targets lack the DPI to render them meaningfully. I dislike the lack of a gap and/or rounded corners before the footer as it doesn't match the header, and using that same reasoning I don't like the footer being full width when the content is not -- that's painting yourself into 100% min-height layout which may or may not be viable depending on what else is going on with the page.

    BUT, more importantly, what's it going to do when you make it responsive? Are you simply dicking around in some goofy paint program instead of actually building a proper layout? Sorry to say, but screwing around drawing pictures is NOT web design, no matter how many ignorant PSD jockeys claim otherwise. It's a buggy, back-assward practice that puts the cart before the horse -- and usually results in broken, inaccessible garbage design that is ultimately useless to visitors.

    Much less you start doing things that might not even be viable on an accessible design, like the scripttard image rotator near the bottom of your content area... but that comes down to the question do you want to make websites that are useful to visitors, or are you out to stroke the designers... ego... Let's use the word ego. I mean something else, but ego will do for the little old ladies at the afternoon tea party.
     
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    kk5st Prominent Member

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    The improper use of the word 'to' is getting on my last nerve, and I imagine that of every other person who didn't sleep through grammar class. 'That' points to something; it does not compare nor separate. The word you want is 'from', i.e. the colors vary from that shown. Likewise something doesn't differ to/that/than the other. It differs or is different from the other.

    That's my rant, but unless your target audience is looking for a KMart blue light special, it would be a Good Thing to use words properly.

    cheers,

    gary
     
    kk5st, Nov 30, 2014 IP