Mobile Phones Site

Discussion in 'Websites' started by khu84, Feb 9, 2009.

  1. #1
    Hi,
    Need reviews on my cell phone site: http://www.mobifonz.com
    While reviewing please try to cover many thing like design, content, seo and ads placement.

    Many thanks in advance.
     
    khu84, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  2. awa

    awa Greenhorn

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    #2
    sorry, but looks cheap and very simple
    i'm about design
     
    awa, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  3. tihomir_wwf

    tihomir_wwf Active Member

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    #3
    I like the clear design, but the site needs more content
     
    tihomir_wwf, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  4. Smilerman

    Smilerman Peon

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    #4
    Not sure mobile phones is the main focus of this site. Seems to be some ulterior going on.
    Get some up to date phones on there
     
    Smilerman, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  5. K4NK4

    K4NK4 Guest

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    #5
    there arent enough color :D
     
    K4NK4, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  6. khu84

    khu84 Active Member

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    #6
    ok, what do u think should I pay for a web design? And yes will be adding some content in coming days.
     
    khu84, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  7. webbexperts

    webbexperts Peon

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    #7
    wow I think your site would be nice could be nice if there was some color and some pictures something eye catching on the first page to make everyone want to stay on the page and work on your site and use your site just my thoughts
     
    webbexperts, Feb 9, 2009 IP
  8. 2advance

    2advance Well-Known Member

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    #8
    The content in the home page is too low. I found lot of empty spaces in your site. Add some images to fill it.
     
    2advance, Feb 11, 2009 IP
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    #9
    I agree, get some more content on the site, colours are OK, but I would see about getting rid of the all the borders..

    Also think about getting a proper logo done too.

    Good luck!
     
    kronklee, Feb 11, 2009 IP
  10. khu84

    khu84 Active Member

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    Thank you all for so good suggestions as I get some time I will be working on site and will come back, until that if you can come up with any more good ideas, I will be happy.
     
    khu84, Feb 15, 2009 IP
  11. bajpakhi

    bajpakhi Banned

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    #11
    Clean design, easy on the eayes. But as others said, you need a lot more content if you want a proper launch. Good Luck.
     
    bajpakhi, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #12
    Make your site fonts smaller and give the links of nav bar in the table it will looking much pretty
     
    cuffy, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #13
    Looks like the work of a teenager, it that is your market well done!
     
    shop-bright, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #14
    i think you should give a new look to the logo... home page is very empty... try filling it with ur content..
    everythings ok... :)
     
    syedharis01, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #15
    No offense but it does look tacky and cheap.

    I would also get rid of the free tracker, I know it's a decent tool but you don't want the whole world knowing you stats.

    The pictures need updating and you seriously need to think about updating the website.

    How much seo work have you done so far?
     
    Pixulated, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #16
    I like your site because cool color.
     
    ivanslackers, Feb 15, 2009 IP
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    #17
    to be honest, it ws pretty ordinary!! u need to have a better design n for sure a lot of more content
     
    pranavabrol, Feb 16, 2009 IP
  18. SuccessSuccess

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    #18
    i think there is lot of scope for improvement and thats good news. we all want progress and thats what is possible here. i can see pure nice efforts in this site

    only thing is it needs some touch ups. visit as many sites as possible & try & observe things that u like & you can put them in your site

    best of luck
     
    SuccessSuccess, Feb 16, 2009 IP
  19. khu84

    khu84 Active Member

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    #19
    Not much emphisized on seo other than some link building.


    Thanks all, I value all the good suggestion from you. I will definately taking the care of things upcoming weekend. Secondly I have lots of, about 142 newsletter subscribers so I am thinking that I must start sending them the newsletters now :)
     
    khu84, Feb 17, 2009 IP
  20. oronoa

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    #20
    looks cheap man,
    buy a decent template from somewhere. This would be a good start
     
    oronoa, Feb 17, 2009 IP