Contest Menu of Services for Spa $25 (48 hours)

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by tonybonafide, Jan 26, 2018.

  1. #1
    Hello - I need a 3' x 2' menu board that shows our spa services. I am showing what I came up with but absolutely HATE IT! I am Not a graphic designer. This needs to look good as it is in our entry way. I will award within 48 hours but the quicker you get me something that looks good, the more likely I choose you!
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    tonybonafide, Jan 26, 2018 IP
  2. Untidy

    Untidy Member

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    #2
    Hi there tony,
    Please see my design below:

    This design can tri-fold (see example here) to stand on a desk with clear visual to pricing. It was created on an a4 canvas 300dpi.

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  3. tonybonafide

    tonybonafide Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Feedback based on this subbmital

    1. This will go on a wall with some nice stand-offs. It will be 3 feet wide be 2 feet tall so I am thinking everything bigger.
    2. I don't really like the background chosen - looks like a restaurant
    3. I do like the packages section - maybe bigger
    4. Possible use some icons for Body massage, Reflexology (maybe a foot), Surf & Turf Maybe icons from 1 and 2 or different

    Really good overall though!!
     
    tonybonafide, Jan 26, 2018 IP
  4. tonybonafide

    tonybonafide Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Also Surf & Turf is Foot and Body and NOT Foot and Head
     
    tonybonafide, Jan 26, 2018 IP
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    #5
    Here's my entry:
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  6. tonybonafide

    tonybonafide Well-Known Member

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    #6
    I don't like it - looks amateur-ish.
     
    tonybonafide, Jan 27, 2018 IP
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    #7
    Hi CH,
    Please see revised attached:

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  8. tonybonafide

    tonybonafide Well-Known Member

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    #8
    The original icon for silver package was fine - I dont like new one. I want those packages to be BIGGER. There is a lot of room for them and they are getting lost.
    Other changes...
    1. Prices should be quoted as $ and amount NOT amount and $ For example 40 should be $40 NOT 40$
    2. Enhancements section needs some work - pretty small and boring now.
    3. Under surf & turf should say "Foot and Body"

    If you make these changes I think we are close to a deal!!!

    Thanks!

    Tony
     
    tonybonafide, Jan 27, 2018 IP
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    #9
    Hi there CH,
    Please see revised artwork:

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    Untidy, Jan 27, 2018 IP
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    watari Well-Known Member

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    ...

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    tonybonafide Well-Known Member

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    #11
    Contest is over. I would like to thank UnTidy for the work but in the end, Watari ended up with a design that works best for us. Thank you all!!
     
    tonybonafide, Jan 30, 2018 IP
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    watari Well-Known Member

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    payment received and files sent.
    thanks!
     
    watari, Jan 30, 2018 IP