MasterMind Logo Concept - Feedback Required

Hello! Everyone,

I will really appreciate if you review my logo concept and provide feedback for improvement.

 

Hi
I really like the central logo, I think it is a very clean design and it also visually appealing, the bottom left logo is also a good design, again its visually appealing. I dont feel that the black and white version is as good as it is not very aesthetically appealing. I think with some more colour it could also be a good design. The 20 dollar logo is also a good layout but perhaps a bit basic, I think maybe using a more vibrant colour could improve the design. Overall I think you have some very good designs and I think any logo apart from the black and white logo would work very well!

 

Its Perfect- no need for any improvements

 

Not a bad concept but there are a few issues. I would definitely not say perfect.

The "Ms" Icons: You have slight overlapping areas where there are dark thin lines. Is a bit out of place. I think you may want to merge the separate letters and then play with moving them around more so spaces are consistent. It gets a little too muddy and messy in some areas.

It also looks like you got the separate colors by lowering the transparency rather than changing the colors. That will be an issue later when putting on different background.

I did this image real quick but maybe you can go this route. Let me know what you think.