marketing content?

Is the content of this online backgammon website marketing enough?
Would you sugget a rewrite?

I'm not sure about it.

Thanks.

 

I am not sure about how much revenue you are generating from this website right now. However, I would like to vote in favor of hiring a professional writer to convert the content in to more business like.

 

A good free way to help your site would be to write some good articles and submit them to article directories with a link to your site in the articles. This can send lots of traffic to your site, if the articles are good.

 

so.. the texts there be a reason for low ROI?

thanks

 

I would have someone who is a native English speaker correct the grammatical errors on the site. It will make it more credible.

 

It cannot be the text only. Your doubt is more relevant.You need to focus on other techniques and tools as well. Increased popularity with link growth, reciprocal links, quality Ads,and many other SEO related aspects are also responsible for the revenue generation factor.

 

All the traffic/promoting/seo thing is being taken care of professionally. The text isn't, so I came here to ask about the text.

So the grammatical errors are one thing, thank you.
Anything else I should take care of, in order to make the text better and encouraging to download the software?