Contest Make My Logo Sexier - $30

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by mmelen, Oct 22, 2012.

  1. mmelen

    mmelen Well-Known Member

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    #21
    @brotherVirtu Good try. I don't think the text goes with the current website. And it is not clear that A is a lightbulb. I do however like the fact that the lightbulb goes along with the text very well. I think this is what's missing from many other entries - text and lightbulb being a good fit together.
     
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    Ashish92 Active Member

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    #22
    Hope you like my entry. I am open to all modifications.

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  3. brotherVirtu

    brotherVirtu Active Member

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    #23
    i want to try again... change the light bulb effect.. hope you like it....
     

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  4. brotherVirtu

    brotherVirtu Active Member

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    #24
    sorry .. there is an error when I do a post
    i want to try again... change the light bulb effect.. hope you like it....
     
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  5. mmelen

    mmelen Well-Known Member

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    #25
    brotherVirtu, lightbulb definitely looks better now. I still don't think it goes with the feel of the website though.
     
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  6. kainraziall

    kainraziall Notable Member

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    #26
    Another Try, hope you like it

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  7. Roger_Svensson

    Roger_Svensson Peon

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    #27
    Hello there, Here is my effort to make it sexier :)hope to hear from you...... Is it sexy,sexier or sexiest ?
    smart-seo.jpg
     
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  8. mmelen

    mmelen Well-Known Member

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    #28
    @kainraziall Good job with the text but the lightbulb is too unoriginal. Looks like just a generic icon.
    @Roger_Svensson lightbulb does not look great and i don't like the text either.
     
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  9. kainraziall

    kainraziall Notable Member

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    #29
    Thanks for the feedback, here is the revision

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  10. MantisArt

    MantisArt Well-Known Member

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    #30
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  11. zali04

    zali04 Greenhorn

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    #31
    BRAIN.jpg

    FeedBack Appreciated...
     
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  12. mmelen

    mmelen Well-Known Member

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    #32
    @kainraziall, lightbulb still looks too much of a generic icon to me.
    @zali04 , sorry I don't like them. It doesn't look like lightbulbs go with the logo - it looks like they were found in generic icon sets.

    @MantisArt , thanks for following the suggestions. Just a couple more
    - Make lightbulb a little smaller, or at least shorter. Maybe the bottom part - have 3 lines instead of 4. I just want it to blend with text more.
    - Can you try a variation where the brain takes up the whole lightbulb? (like this http://99designs.com/logo-design/store/10152 - except your style)
     
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  13. kainraziall

    kainraziall Notable Member

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    #33
    Shall i revise my entry

    Thanks
    Kain
     
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  14. mmelen

    mmelen Well-Known Member

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    #34
    kainraziall - No, unless you have a different concept which can compete with MantisArt's (#30) quality and originality, I wouldn't waste your time.
     
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  15. MantisArt

    MantisArt Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Hi mmelen,

    Thanks for the feedback. here are the changes on the design as requested.


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  16. kainraziall

    kainraziall Notable Member

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    #36
    My last try, Hope you like it

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    Thanks
    Kain
     
    Last edited: Oct 26, 2012
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  17. brotherVirtu

    brotherVirtu Active Member

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    #37
    i'm trying to make a difference from my previous logo..
    i try not to make a round font.. but, like this...
    5.jpg
     
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  18. Colleen

    Colleen Illustrious Member

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    #38
    Another try.

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  19. brotherVirtu

    brotherVirtu Active Member

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    #39
    this is screenshot from my revisi logo
     
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  20. brotherVirtu

    brotherVirtu Active Member

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    #40
    is it still looks the same or different from the previous one?
     
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