Looking for some Help and Advice

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by Personal Trainer, Oct 12, 2006.

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    Anyone Please Review this site and tell me what you think


    Real Estate Virtual Assistant

    Please give feedback on design, seo, and anything else.

    the site is working on ranking for Real Estate Virtual Assistant.

    thanks all.
     
    Personal Trainer, Oct 12, 2006 IP
  2. rosiee007

    rosiee007 Notable Member

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    You should work on improving the design of the website. Try to avoid the horizontal scroll bar to give a better look.
     
    rosiee007, Oct 12, 2006 IP
  3. sabian1982

    sabian1982 Notable Member

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    Its amazing how easy it is to recognise a Frontpage designed website without even looking at the source code (u'd think microsoft would have come up with a better tool by now!).

    I think they key problem with your design (putting aside the obvious design issues) is the quantity of information and images on the page. There are links, icons, payment buttons, newsletter signups, IM online buttons, a further service menu further down the screen then further icons for google, yahoo and finally some more information about you and the site. In short theres way too much 'stuff' on that single page.

    On the upside your text content is good! It contains your keywords, its easy to read and important phrases are in bold which is excellent for SEO purposes.

    If you really want to take the site forward and use it as an information, marketing and/or income tool you seriously need to think about getting someone to design something to suit your needs. It doesn't need to be expensive or complex, it just needs to be simple, clear and a lot less confusing!

    Best of luck.
     
    sabian1982, Oct 13, 2006 IP
  4. Personal Trainer

    Personal Trainer Peon

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    Sounds good will let her know, anything else, keep up the great feedback.

    it's in the proccessed of being re-designed, though finding a good designer can be tough well at least one that listens.
     
    Personal Trainer, Oct 13, 2006 IP
  5. elektro

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    Well,

    I think you better decrease the font size. Other way, you better learn how to make a good website.

    I just learned that Derek Gehl is giving away copies of his #1 best-selling Internet Marketing Course for $2.95.

    Contact me if you want some!
     
    elektro, Oct 13, 2006 IP
  6. imnotadoctor

    imnotadoctor Well-Known Member

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    I would try changing the whole design. It needs to look professional. You might want to try a wordpress type of site. You can get some great professional looking templates for wordpress and then you can hack up the code till your hearts content.
     
    imnotadoctor, Oct 13, 2006 IP
  7. syia86

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    As you want to get into the market of real estate virtual assistant, I think you should have a page that tells people who you are,your expertise because if I am on your site certainly I want to find some credential about you.
     
    syia86, Oct 16, 2006 IP
  8. babez

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    I won't use your service, looks too much like an mfa-page...
     
    babez, Oct 18, 2006 IP
  9. sabian1982

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    When are we going to get to see the new design then? are we allowed a sneak peak? :p
     
    sabian1982, Oct 18, 2006 IP
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    Still working on the new design? Let us know when it's done -- the one you have posted now needs a good bit of work to make it flow nice.
     
    PatsyD, Oct 22, 2006 IP
  11. JEET

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    I think there are only a few problems which you need to fix.

    * Fit the content in the screen area, so people don't have to scroll sideways. I think you are on a large monitor, but there are people who still use 800X600 resolution on a 14 or 15 inch monitor.

    * Reduce the font size with stylesheet. Right now it looks too big at places, specially in top header. I think you must consider using a smaller header heightwise. It's too big.

    * Organise the page. You have lot of content on homepage, but it looks all scatterred. Divide it into sections, color the main heading, then add the content.

    * Some copywriting help would be useful for you. Like you say, "Some people ask me why did I get in this business?"
    You are not writing your autobiography, are you? :)
    Instead you can use, "Sarah Reiter, the president of company name, is a professionally certified ..."

    I think a 2 column layout will be better suited for your site.
    Bye :)
     
    JEET, Oct 22, 2006 IP
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    The Globe from Wikipedia is not looking good. The quality of logo is bad. The whole header section should be grouped thoroughly. The left menu looks too dark, sorry! Ads are placed ineffectively. Type and the whole content looks very inconsistent. I think that such design will not promote visitors to come back.
     
    Kassi, Nov 10, 2006 IP